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though they are whispering, and my hearing muted by the years and the cluttered clang of today, their voices sift softly through the trees, a ghost chorus, chanting late songs from the killing grounds, wafting warily around the trunks on the backs of bent breezes their names come like seeds in the hopeful spring rains as if they yearn to be born again but the earth does not bring forth their lost and longing faces new names take their places not in the choking jungle canopies among the rubber trees, the bamboo, the Mekong’s murky, mournful flow where I last heard their plaintive pleas drowned by the roar of chopper blades, and my own metal screaming but now in the desert, under the Tigris’ and Euphrates’ unforgiving suns still, I hear them, a labored litany through the trees yet asking to return to sit with me, as the sun sets white, on my gray eyes and new voices silence their wraithlike song
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Dec 11, 2013
Dec 11, 2013 at 2:30 PM UTC
I hear them, through the trees
though they are whispering, and my hearing muted by the years and the cluttered clang of today, their voices sift softly through the trees, a ghost chorus, chanting late songs from the killing grounds, wafting warily around the trunks on the backs of bent breezes their names come like seeds in the hopeful spring rains as if they yearn to be born again but the earth does not bring forth their lost and longing faces new names take their places not in the choking jungle canopies among the rubber trees, the bamboo, the Mekong’s murky, mournful flow where I last heard their plaintive pleas drowned by the roar of chopper blades, and my own metal screaming but now in the desert, under the Tigris’ and Euphrates’ unforgiving suns still, I hear them, a labored litany through the trees yet asking to return to sit with me, as the sun sets white, on my gray eyes and new voices silence their wraithlike song
Vietnam--Iraq: Is there any real difference in the killing fields? Not the same grit as my "Primal Whisper," "Tay Ninh Province," or even "The Death of the Mongrel Pup," but based partially on an actual event, relayed to me in a Danang guard tower by a former chopper door gunner, about having to leave two  men behind.
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Dec 11, 2013
Dec 11, 2013 at 2:30 PM UTC
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