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What a critical world I show off my talents And get no praise All you see are the tiny mistakes You magnify the flaws And shove them in my face It’s a routine with everything I say Everything I make Everything I do Now I strive for perfection To silence your hate And judgemental reviews
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Jun 19, 2013
Jun 19, 2013 at 10:59 PM UTC
I Can Live Without Your Critiques
What a critical world I show off my talents And get no praise All you see are the tiny mistakes You magnify the flaws And shove them in my face It’s a routine with everything I say Everything I make Everything I do Now I strive for perfection To silence your hate And judgemental reviews
Every ******* thing I do gets criticized and I'm left feeling like a worthless pile of ****
robin-thorne
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23/F/American
Jun 19, 2013
Jun 19, 2013 at 10:59 PM UTC
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