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I don't like it when poems are long When poems are long and keep going on and on I don't like it when poems are long because my brain begins to think of a song and then a hippopotamus twirling and whirling around When poems keep going on and on my mind cannot stand another stanza and then the lion pops into my head The lion that tells me this is gonna be long that this poem is as vast as the sea and nor you or I will be able to flee I don't like it when poems are long unless of course they are written into a song will hippopotamuses dancing Unless that poem is intriguing with life and color and passion with feeling and being and desire excuse me? But I do not like it when poems are long unless they are good and they are strong
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Jan 16, 2014
Jan 16, 2014 at 10:18 PM UTC
Irony and ADHD
I don't like it when poems are long When poems are long and keep going on and on I don't like it when poems are long because my brain begins to think of a song and then a hippopotamus twirling and whirling around When poems keep going on and on my mind cannot stand another stanza and then the lion pops into my head The lion that tells me this is gonna be long that this poem is as vast as the sea and nor you or I will be able to flee I don't like it when poems are long unless of course they are written into a song will hippopotamuses dancing Unless that poem is intriguing with life and color and passion with feeling and being and desire excuse me? But I do not like it when poems are long unless they are good and they are strong
becca-7
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Jan 16, 2014
Jan 16, 2014 at 10:18 PM UTC
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