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It's at 6:30 in the morning, When the sky is just waking, Pale blues and yellows and The touch of peach on the horizon When I wake for no good reason And stare out at the sky, admiring. And I look down at you next to me Breathing softly and sweetly in sleep. It is then that I wish, should you stir, Turning over to see me, that You had something stunningly beautiful To see when you wake as well. Some face that makes you catch breath For a moment, and your eyes become Fixated. A perfect complexion, perhaps. Rosey, defined lips just the perfect shape. If I had deep ocean eyes or ones Of solid gold. Maybe the perfect amount of scattered freckles. A straight, modest nose. Impeccable brows. Soft, silky smooth hair that always looks done, even when it's not. I wish I had these things to offer At 6:30 in the morning. In those brief shared moments Before we return to sleep. They say beauty is relative, It is about "perspective." And though you may think I'm something special, My perspective is one who feels she owes something more To the man who deserves the world.
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Oct 13, 2014
Oct 13, 2014 at 3:18 PM UTC
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It's at 6:30 in the morning, When the sky is just waking, Pale blues and yellows and The touch of peach on the horizon When I wake for no good reason And stare out at the sky, admiring. And I look down at you next to me Breathing softly and sweetly in sleep. It is then that I wish, should you stir, Turning over to see me, that You had something stunningly beautiful To see when you wake as well. Some face that makes you catch breath For a moment, and your eyes become Fixated. A perfect complexion, perhaps. Rosey, defined lips just the perfect shape. If I had deep ocean eyes or ones Of solid gold. Maybe the perfect amount of scattered freckles. A straight, modest nose. Impeccable brows. Soft, silky smooth hair that always looks done, even when it's not. I wish I had these things to offer At 6:30 in the morning. In those brief shared moments Before we return to sleep. They say beauty is relative, It is about "perspective." And though you may think I'm something special, My perspective is one who feels she owes something more To the man who deserves the world.
erica-buehler
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Oct 13, 2014
Oct 13, 2014 at 3:18 PM UTC
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