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Like the Sun, that surrounded by Planets The warm effect that gives comfort Without realizing, The Planets speed to surround it increases Wheter the Sun is not realizing his effects or is he just happy to be surrounded?
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Feb 5, 2018
Feb 5, 2018 at 11:16 AM UTC
Sun & The Planets
Like the Sun, that surrounded by Planets The warm effect that gives comfort Without realizing, The Planets speed to surround it increases Wheter the Sun is not realizing his effects or is he just happy to be surrounded?
Deenore25
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25/F/Jakarta, Indonesia
Feb 5, 2018
Feb 5, 2018 at 11:16 AM UTC
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