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She tied a black ribbon around my wrist Like a dark lake reflecting moonlight And in my enchantment, I missed The ribbon was tied far too tight She tied a black ribbon around my neck So cold on my skin like ice And in my fervor, I failed to see The ribbon was knotted up thrice She tied a black ribbon around my heart Winding its way through my veins She gave a tug, and I gave a start As her ribbon turned out to be chains
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Mar 2, 2020
Mar 2, 2020 at 1:29 PM UTC
Black Ribbons
She tied a black ribbon around my wrist Like a dark lake reflecting moonlight And in my enchantment, I missed The ribbon was tied far too tight She tied a black ribbon around my neck So cold on my skin like ice And in my fervor, I failed to see The ribbon was knotted up thrice She tied a black ribbon around my heart Winding its way through my veins She gave a tug, and I gave a start As her ribbon turned out to be chains
This is a really dark poem that came about from being young and dating. I was really into this girl who didn't view me the same way. Instead of letting me down, she carried me along. I was too stupid to see that I was being used and couldn't get out of the situation. The poem is built on a simple lyrical rhyme structure. Hope you guys like it!
MikeStefan
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37/M/Minneapolis
Mar 2, 2020
Mar 2, 2020 at 1:29 PM UTC
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