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An empty room lies waiting Cold, curtain drawn but clean Hiding lust in unseen corners Away from the white bulb glare No floorboard creaking, mattress squeaking Life speaking
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Jul 22, 2014
Jul 22, 2014 at 5:25 AM UTC
An Empty Room (unfinished)
An empty room lies waiting Cold, curtain drawn but clean Hiding lust in unseen corners Away from the white bulb glare No floorboard creaking, mattress squeaking Life speaking
I wrote this when I was 17 and still a ****** - in the sixth form and couldn't wait to leave school and go out in the big wide world. Now I look back and realise it was one of the best times - for forging friendships and having fun.  The poem feels unfinished but I've never been able to add to it.
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Jul 22, 2014
Jul 22, 2014 at 5:25 AM UTC
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