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Along came a spider, with claws full of fire, burning alive with a horrid desire. It was the dead of night, no safety in sight; and his hands held me tight. He bit and he clawed, he broke all of the laws - and no one had saw. His hands burned my skin; he ripped deep within... my body used in sin. The darkness grew worse as he laid his curse, and my life did disperse... because along came a spider, filled with a deadly desire. Sarah Gammon © 16/01/2009
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May 10, 2013
May 10, 2013 at 8:42 AM UTC
Along Came a Spider, version 2
Along came a spider, with claws full of fire, burning alive with a horrid desire. It was the dead of night, no safety in sight; and his hands held me tight. He bit and he clawed, he broke all of the laws - and no one had saw. His hands burned my skin; he ripped deep within... my body used in sin. The darkness grew worse as he laid his curse, and my life did disperse... because along came a spider, filled with a deadly desire. Sarah Gammon © 16/01/2009
This poem was originally written in 2009, as you can see. I made a second version because I wasn't sure the message was clear in the first one, so I made a second, which I'm still not sure if people get it. I decided to add it onto this website as well. It was one of my favorites.
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May 10, 2013
May 10, 2013 at 8:42 AM UTC
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