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She's done Finalizing her first poem Happiness shines from her eyes Sharing a excerpt from her Train of thoughts Was a part of her dreams. She gleams in joy While proofreading it Cause she believes everyone Can relate to it But it's been 15 hours Since she posted it 95 views but no one's reacted to it Not even a like or a do better Next time comment Self esteem has shaded a dark veil over the spark of creativity Now she just scribbles scripts That never make it to the editors cut Doesn't come out from her room Anymore Her best friend now is silence For as she says, He allows her to speak
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Feb 26, 2019
Feb 26, 2019 at 10:08 AM UTC
Poetic Artifice
She's done Finalizing her first poem Happiness shines from her eyes Sharing a excerpt from her Train of thoughts Was a part of her dreams. She gleams in joy While proofreading it Cause she believes everyone Can relate to it But it's been 15 hours Since she posted it 95 views but no one's reacted to it Not even a like or a do better Next time comment Self esteem has shaded a dark veil over the spark of creativity Now she just scribbles scripts That never make it to the editors cut Doesn't come out from her room Anymore Her best friend now is silence For as she says, He allows her to speak
A untold story that really isn't heavy but weighs heavily on self esteem redemption
Hilla254
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20/M/Kenya
Feb 26, 2019
Feb 26, 2019 at 10:08 AM UTC
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