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50 shades of ****** up, I've ventured deep within you. ...scrutinized every centimeter, every corner, of that perplexing cavernous mind of yours.                               *I                                         fell                                                    in                                                                 love* ...but somewhere between "I" and "love" I found myself stumbling into the spaces between them. I knew you were too weak to catch me but those cogent promises, that compelling voice, how could I not succumb, baby? I never doubted you and that was my downfall. I stood in the gap for you, defended you, when anyone pestered me with pessimism. There's this saying about.... ...a log being in your eye yet you're trying to take a speck out of someone else's; Let's just subliminally throw the ***** laundry out. Out of all the wrongs I've ever done, I'm able to say, **"I never cheated." "I never gave up." "I was always there for you." "I kept my promises."** kinda distasteful that you can't, huh? tbc has been discontinued.                                              TheEnd.
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Feb 10, 2015
Feb 10, 2015 at 4:48 PM UTC
tbc... (pt.2) -Final-
50 shades of ****** up, I've ventured deep within you. ...scrutinized every centimeter, every corner, of that perplexing cavernous mind of yours.                               *I                                         fell                                                    in                                                                 love* ...but somewhere between "I" and "love" I found myself stumbling into the spaces between them. I knew you were too weak to catch me but those cogent promises, that compelling voice, how could I not succumb, baby? I never doubted you and that was my downfall. I stood in the gap for you, defended you, when anyone pestered me with pessimism. There's this saying about.... ...a log being in your eye yet you're trying to take a speck out of someone else's; Let's just subliminally throw the ***** laundry out. Out of all the wrongs I've ever done, I'm able to say, **"I never cheated." "I never gave up." "I was always there for you." "I kept my promises."** kinda distasteful that you can't, huh? tbc has been discontinued.                                              TheEnd.
tbc: to be continued. it ended the way it did bc I began exerting too many emotions and the person this is directed to doesn't deserve an ounce of it. "TheEnd" represents the end, no space in between because there isn't anymore space in my poetry or life for another tbc.
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Feb 10, 2015
Feb 10, 2015 at 4:48 PM UTC
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