he's here

and once again i fall slowly
light as a feather
gravitating to the river
to be washed away
by the peaceful flow

melonade

warm

Don&#8217;t we all want to be carried to a serene savannah?

(Just read this that was pushed into my mailbox.)

Nice written, creating smile inside my mind.

I like how your word choices and lines are light as a feather - I only wondered if 'gravitating' hit the same soft/airy note...