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i'm not him although our names are similar, i suppose? but we're very different. one of the things is, he's the apple of your eye he's there with you and i'm stuck down here, in another state. oh how i hope he doesn't take that privilege for granted. i understand though, what's not to like about him? what's there to like about me? i'm not bitter. just upset. because i was never really "over you" i wasn't ever really "in love" with you. i'm in love with the idea of being together though oh, what a fairy tale! i'm down here, suffering. because i don't get the chance to see that lovely face of yours. i'm not love sick, i'm dying for love. your love, oh how sweet it would be.
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Mar 15, 2013
Mar 15, 2013 at 11:25 PM UTC
it was foolish of me to think i ever had a chance to woo you.
i'm not him although our names are similar, i suppose? but we're very different. one of the things is, he's the apple of your eye he's there with you and i'm stuck down here, in another state. oh how i hope he doesn't take that privilege for granted. i understand though, what's not to like about him? what's there to like about me? i'm not bitter. just upset. because i was never really "over you" i wasn't ever really "in love" with you. i'm in love with the idea of being together though oh, what a fairy tale! i'm down here, suffering. because i don't get the chance to see that lovely face of yours. i'm not love sick, i'm dying for love. your love, oh how sweet it would be.
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Mar 15, 2013
Mar 15, 2013 at 11:25 PM UTC
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