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I WANT YOU TO LISTEN BEFORE YOU FEEL. I Congratulate You. ... I understand now That I am not and she is neither and nor are you. In Life is Man, Woman and Money. And I am disgusted with my own state of affairs. I am a HYPOCRITE, (YOU COULD BE WORSE ) that a rat that is not a part of a the race has a better chance of virtue. I am not unique but part of the equation of nature for a upon a time in history I was a "FEATHERLESS BIPED" just as a chicken awaiting the process of the roast. YET upon death and decay, if I am not in history as a statue to symbolise immortality. I will no longer be MAN but a CREATURE with bones undistinguishable from my kind. These words are of a man man that has nothing to him and his time but a chance to reflect on life's greatest EQUATION of meaning. These are the words of the man that lives like dog he dares to speak his mind a man we question his existence and purpose we call mad, insane and a savage. His words will never shake you if you question WHY HE DARES TO SPEAK IF HE IS NOTHING? Were you truly listening? Question. Would you lend an ear to a A man that lives like a dog or A Man that lives in concrete bubble? I want you to Think beyond the concrete bubble you call safe. MAN + WOMAN x MONEY(NATURE)=............... whats your equation like? ©Hansmind, 2018
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Mar 4, 2018
Mar 4, 2018 at 9:07 AM UTC
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I WANT YOU TO LISTEN BEFORE YOU FEEL. I Congratulate You. ... I understand now That I am not and she is neither and nor are you. In Life is Man, Woman and Money. And I am disgusted with my own state of affairs. I am a HYPOCRITE, (YOU COULD BE WORSE ) that a rat that is not a part of a the race has a better chance of virtue. I am not unique but part of the equation of nature for a upon a time in history I was a "FEATHERLESS BIPED" just as a chicken awaiting the process of the roast. YET upon death and decay, if I am not in history as a statue to symbolise immortality. I will no longer be MAN but a CREATURE with bones undistinguishable from my kind. These words are of a man man that has nothing to him and his time but a chance to reflect on life's greatest EQUATION of meaning. These are the words of the man that lives like dog he dares to speak his mind a man we question his existence and purpose we call mad, insane and a savage. His words will never shake you if you question WHY HE DARES TO SPEAK IF HE IS NOTHING? Were you truly listening? Question. Would you lend an ear to a A man that lives like a dog or A Man that lives in concrete bubble? I want you to Think beyond the concrete bubble you call safe. MAN + WOMAN x MONEY(NATURE)=............... whats your equation like? ©Hansmind, 2018
Hello, I hope you are all well. I would like thank you for the support this year, I am really great full for all the comments and likes. Please feel free to comment and CRITIC THE POEM. Its going to be the first poem in my 4th collection called "Seasoned Thoughts" KINDLY LIKE, COMMENT & SHARE. Thank you.
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Mar 4, 2018
Mar 4, 2018 at 9:07 AM UTC
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