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*Water falls. Fast. Furious. Melancholic. I could watch it all day. My ill mind won't let go of me. I watch the water fall. Fall. Fall. Everything slowly spins around me, I **** it all in. I breathe in, I breathe out. No thoughts, no complexity, just the water. Filling my whole scene. Filling all of me. Fast spreading mental illness. Furious judging voice, telling me not to let go. Melancholic mind, capturing me, pulling me down. Down. Down. Under the water. Breathe in, breathe out. My lungs are filling, water falls, down in my lungs. Filling my whole scene, I draw my last breath.* MJR. 16/01-15
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Jan 16, 2015
Jan 16, 2015 at 4:16 AM UTC
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*Water falls. Fast. Furious. Melancholic. I could watch it all day. My ill mind won't let go of me. I watch the water fall. Fall. Fall. Everything slowly spins around me, I **** it all in. I breathe in, I breathe out. No thoughts, no complexity, just the water. Filling my whole scene. Filling all of me. Fast spreading mental illness. Furious judging voice, telling me not to let go. Melancholic mind, capturing me, pulling me down. Down. Down. Under the water. Breathe in, breathe out. My lungs are filling, water falls, down in my lungs. Filling my whole scene, I draw my last breath.* MJR. 16/01-15
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Jan 16, 2015
Jan 16, 2015 at 4:16 AM UTC
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