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my house would be a lot better if the kinks were all worked out if the water wouldnt get so hot i think i might get burned if the water wouldnt get so cold i think i might get frostbite if i had my own room instead of sharing with my sister if my brother wouldnt pester me about how he needs help with everything if my mom wouldnt yell at me because my dads being mean if my dad wouldnt annoy everyone because he thinks hes being funny if my cat wouldnt jump on my bed and knock everything off if my dog wouldnt bark so loud at the slightest sound if my hamster wouldnt always get stuck in the stupid wheel if i could actually sleep at night instead of crying for hours my house would be a lot better if there werent so many reasons for it to not feel like a home.
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Nov 15, 2014
Nov 15, 2014 at 11:01 PM UTC
my house
my house would be a lot better if the kinks were all worked out if the water wouldnt get so hot i think i might get burned if the water wouldnt get so cold i think i might get frostbite if i had my own room instead of sharing with my sister if my brother wouldnt pester me about how he needs help with everything if my mom wouldnt yell at me because my dads being mean if my dad wouldnt annoy everyone because he thinks hes being funny if my cat wouldnt jump on my bed and knock everything off if my dog wouldnt bark so loud at the slightest sound if my hamster wouldnt always get stuck in the stupid wheel if i could actually sleep at night instead of crying for hours my house would be a lot better if there werent so many reasons for it to not feel like a home.
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Nov 15, 2014
Nov 15, 2014 at 11:01 PM UTC
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