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wrender
14/Agender hey, im wren im starting to write poetry so i figured i would post it here. im always open to constructive criticism
Day by day she became worse but she didn't care for no one else did so why should she finally one day something inside her snapped she went to the medicine cabinet and grabbed everything and wrote her note minutes later she was gone but do not worry you will see her again no matter how long it takes she will come back to you
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Sep 15, 2016
Sep 15, 2016 at 9:19 AM UTC
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The rustle of sheets the pacing of feet and the lights outside flicker in the dark street that is covered in sleet the house is losing heat shiver under blankets to gain warmth is a feat when the big hand meets the little hand, there are seats that are inanimate and cold anxiety ain't sweet anxiety ain't sweet anxiety ain't sweet
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Jan 24, 2016
Jan 24, 2016 at 8:42 PM UTC
Anxiety
Going nowhere? Wrong. The earth is spinning at 1038 miles per hour, whipping ‘round the Sun at 18 miles per second. Our solar system is travelling the galaxy at 155 miles per second, and our galaxy is sprinting through space at 185 miles per second. You’re sitting on your bed and you’re travelling the universe faster than you can ever imagine. Every millisecond of your life you’re somewhere new— so take a deep breath. You’re going everywhere.
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Jan 16, 2016
Jan 16, 2016 at 2:10 PM UTC
Going Everywhere