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victoria-donbeck
American I am fresh out of high school. I started writting poetry back in the 5th grade but ive become more in tune with myself and theres are my stronger poems. A few have been published before and I'm proud of myself for it.
The way you make me feel is different then Ive ever felt and I like it.. a lot. When I know you're coming to see me at work I get giddy and Ive never been giddy before. I turn red, get butterflies, and the shakes and do nothing but smile and laugh. I cant even talk about you to anyone without having a smile on my face. You're so sweet, funny, kind, caring, and you actually have a heart you truely care about my feelings and about me. You make me want to sing and dance after you leave my side. The first time we met was the best day of my life! I had so much fun because of you, I would of never had the guts to get up there an sing and dance in front of everyone like that. You will forever be my Grizzly Bear. Every time we hang out I feel like a superstar and so beautiful.
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Sep 7, 2010
Sep 7, 2010 at 5:45 PM UTC
Grizzly Bear
I thank you everyday before I rest my head for fighting for our country. If anything were to happen to either of you I'll never forget you. I love you the both of you very much. I'm always thinking about you. Sometimes I cry with tears of joy because I got to meet you before you left for this war. Your familys and I want you both home safe and unharmed. I also understand that not everyone makes it home from war but all I have to say is I have faith in you and I know you will come home. All I can really ask for are letters to let me know that you are doing well and to never lie to me if somethings wrong or you need something I want to know. Be safe and Fight hard My Fighting Angels <3
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Aug 25, 2010
Aug 25, 2010 at 7:04 PM UTC
My Fighting Angels
You shouldn't have to go. You shouldn't of signed up to do this. You tell me that you'll come home to mw, But it still worries me that you wont. Every day and every night I worry about you Going over there. I love you with all my heart and soul. You say I relax you and keep you motivated; How is the question, I'm just myself. I'll cry myself to sleep every night you're going to be over there. I tell you don't promise me you'll come home, But please promise me that your letters won't Stop coming to me even if a friend has to write To me in your place.
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Jul 28, 2010
Jul 28, 2010 at 12:09 PM UTC
Baby Boy..
There's no reason for war. To me a war is never won. We go into other countries Which is invasion. We **** their people Which is ****** And we blow up their house/buildings Which in vandalism. If I would do that here in my home town I would go to jail. I don't believe in war because innocent People die, and nothing gets solved. Marines, Army, Navy, and the Air Force I support you all and wish you to come home To your loved ones and those of us who love You, BUT I don't support what our government Puts you through. You leave the ones you love and care for to fight Wars that don't need to be fought. You put your life on the line for what... Things like Illegal Immigrants..Pointless. I respect my veterans. They fought in Wars that matter. Now we fight over things like Illegal Immagrints, And so on. The more we fight the dumber the reasons to fight. STOP WAR AND MAKE PEACE!!
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Jul 26, 2010
Jul 26, 2010 at 8:16 PM UTC
What do you think about war?
Great Grandma Lou I love you. I know that I can't do anything about you dying but if There is anything just let me know an I'll do it. That just makes me so upset to hear that you won't be Living much longer. I hope that you can be strong and show all them doctors How strong you are and fight against the cancer in Your liver and stomach but I know that's not Possible. I want you to have the best memories of me so I'll try To call you every day till you pass on to a better Life. When you do pass on I will ask mom if every other Weekend we can go to visit you. When I get my license I will visit you and Great Grandma Janet every other day and bring you Flowers. It's January 27, 2007 and you passed on. It upset me so much that every time I hear your name I cry forever.
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Jul 23, 2010
Jul 23, 2010 at 8:29 PM UTC
Great Grandama Lou
There's an echo that fades away into the night. Even our friendship disappears. Remember, even with the distance between us, I am someone who cares. I never thought I'd see the day come. I thought I'd never feel this way, But you're a stranger to me now. We both knew this was the last Time we would see each other. Yet we still promised that no matter what, We would remain friends forever. Now I glance back at the memories For the last time Even though some were happy, sad, And painful. But that was... Our last Goodbye.
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Jul 23, 2010
Jul 23, 2010 at 8:29 PM UTC
The Last Goodbye..
Life put is through hell for no reason. we all die in the end so why not let us live it happily with our special someone? You always have to got hrough hell To find your special someone But some people give up before They find them. Why cacn't they be right in front Of us when the time is right? Everyone says "Live life to the Fullest." The best way to do that is with our special someone. Life stands for Let's Inconsiderably **** Everyone!
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Jul 23, 2010
Jul 23, 2010 at 8:28 PM UTC
Special Someone... Where Are You?
Life is one big test We all lose at anyways. Life doesn't care who you hurt Or why you hurt them. No matter what you do you wil Hurt someone or yourself. If you lose a boyfriend or Girlfriend don't move on to Fast because you will never Forget your first love. Love confuses the **** out of everyone! The only thing life wants you to do Is to have fun with whoever And not worry about love Or drama. Don't worry about what people say Or think about you just have fun. Life's not easy because if it was There'd be no reason to live. Do what you thinks right not What others think is right for you.
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Jul 23, 2010
Jul 23, 2010 at 8:27 PM UTC
Life
Over the years I haven't done what          I wanted. I'm not the person I thought I would be;         I'm a crazy party freak. When I need you most you've         Been gone. Ever since you left I've become this mess. I want to get my life back on track        But I need some signs from you if        I'm doing what's right. I think about you often and miss you        So much. I know you're up above watching me. Sometimes I wish you were back         On Earth with me. I just need a sign that says       " I still love you and you haven't let me down."
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Jul 23, 2010
Jul 23, 2010 at 8:21 PM UTC
I Need a Sign..