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travis-swope
American I love to write and read i exspecaly like to recive feedback either good or critical i like to know wher i have left room to improve so that i may further my talent. i seem to be poor at grammar as i often leave many mistakes try to bear with me on this. i can write about anything just name the topic ,
Welcome to my world was it all you ever dreamed they told me it was fantasy a prelude to a dream but in my mind I saw the truth exactly as it wer this fantasy of angles flying by in such a blur welcome I will tell you to this world that I made come in my friend and don’t you be afraid for beneath my wings ill keep you safe from harm so again I say welcome to my world although it isn’t real welcome to this world where you’ll never have to feel, the pain of hate or lust or anything but love For watching over you are angels from above I would gladly carry any cause for you if you’d but to say but all I cant carry is my love for you beyond my dieing day…
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Jul 10, 2010
Jul 10, 2010 at 11:33 AM UTC
welcome to my world 2
In the shayed the subtle sword lies the wrath of that our lord born of that and flaming bird from the shadow he first was heard he lives his life within the page brought to live by the artist sage for in his hand the soul his sword within the sword the flames of a spirit unkempt from the phoenix those flames were rent do not try his patients still for flames do burn and the sword will **** he guards the paper of a dreams light touch be careful my friend that you don’t touch to much for in the attempt to **** this dream the Shayed will strike his sword will gleam and if you take what is not yours the shadows will drag you back to the Shayed and justice there you will await until once more you’ll see the gate you know the place where you will go if demons seed is what you sow. But of the Shayed he’s gentle of soul just a part, of a better whole he is a creature living still a spirit of sorts and yet with skill, of the phoenix this is true yet a part of me and some of you the things we see perhaps unclear you know what I speak my brother dear within the pages our guardian told the Shayed of now and the angels of old, I see this spirit I speak his word I tell yee now of what I’ve heard. He tells of times as yet to last the times he’ll guard when we’ve all past in his heart he wishes it not but he will guard the secrets sought he is a herald of yet to be this the spirit from you and me.
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May 1, 2010
May 1, 2010 at 10:19 AM UTC
the paper guardian
within the light of his own glass sphere In the shadows we await her here in this house of a crimson glow we listen to the ghosts and watch them grow in the world outside as the sky swirls with snow the demons bark as they hold the gate The monsters rise to the call of the feast But the flame rise up to slay the beast The castle stands tall and the ballast is true the king though is missing as are you Who can find him within the tower? The time is nigh! For the clock strikes the hour A darkness descends a hush has arisen the castle is empty except for the prison but within my world my own glass sphere they cannot touch me cannot find me here. Even were I to wait a thousand years and if the crystal princess were to cry a million tears still my corps they would not find Still the castle tall would stand Still the crown would lie in my hand But in this place of desolate skies There is no room to give good byes For I am I tyrant within this place I’m am a monster with a human face for in the dessert of shaken grains you’ll find no tears for my remains
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May 1, 2010
May 1, 2010 at 10:02 AM UTC
within his own glass sphere