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thomas-j-ebert
thomas-j-ebert
American Trying to be a better writer/poet/lyricist / Been playing bass guitar for about 2 years. Have been writing poetry for about 3 years, songs in only about the last year. I've been meaning to write more short stories too. Currently at college for an engineering degree. This is like the polar opposites but I have many interests. I enjoy both. Always seeking critiques on everything I write, its the best way to get better. Hope you enjoy what you find.
Why not, one shot What do you got to lose Giving my heart a bruise Leaving me with the blues Leaving me so confuse Let me turn you on girl But you keep shutting me down Let me turn you on girl But keep turning me down Let me turn you on girl But you keep blowing me off Let me turn you on girl But you won’t give me a shot Why not, one shot Why can’t I have a chance We could go for a dance Why are you so against Why can’t we have romance Just give me one chance, one shot One chance, one shot Just give me one chance, one shot One chance, one shot Just give me one chance, one shot One chance, one shot Just give me one chance, one shot One chance, one shot Let me turn you on girl But you keep shutting me down Let me turn you on girl But keep turning me down Let me turn you on girl But you keep blowing me off Let me turn you on girl But you won’t give me a shot
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Jun 3, 2011
Jun 3, 2011 at 10:56 PM UTC
Turn You On
Black/White Life isn’t just… Black or White, Up or down, Wrong or Right But shades of gray, on a rainy day When a family cries, *** another member died While religion lies, and the churches are fake And you’ll find better salvation by getting baked All this aggression bursting at my seams All from figuring out what it finally means I look into a mirror and it makes me want to scream But insides my head plays a silver screen Life isn’t just black or white, but shades of gray Just like a cloudy sky, on a rainy day Fight or Flight, War or Peace, Life or Death But shades of gray brought on by decay Of bodies littering streets to close to home Blood and guts and exposed bone Ash soot and cinders on houses stone Cities growing corrupt, bankrupt, ingrown But these great graveyards still hold hope People live, fighting through all the smoke Hope for future still unknown evoked Do or Die, Love or Hate, Day or night But shades gray found only at twilight That binds the two, combines the two Just like commonalties that ties us to Everyone on earth, both old and new Does matter what race, creed, or view We’re all stuck together in the same boat So don’t try to sink it, make it float All while singing out this very note Life isn’t just black or white, but shades of gray Just like a cloudy sky, on a rainy day Left or Right, Better or Worse, boy or girl Doesn’t matter how you came to this world What matters isn’t what you take from it But what you make of it, Create from it What you awake in it, and remake in it There are no shortcuts you can take in this And resist the temptation to not coexist Try to remember my rhyme deep in your mind And remember the lines are never defined Life isn’t just black or white, but shades of gray Just like a cloudy sky, on a rainy day Life isn’t just black or white… Life isn’t just black or white… Life isn’t just black or white…
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Jun 3, 2011
Jun 3, 2011 at 10:54 PM UTC
Black/White
Black/White Life isn’t just… Black or White, Up or down, Wrong or Right But shades of gray, on a rainy day When a family cries, *** another member died While religion lies, and the churches are fake And you’ll find better salvation by getting baked All this aggression bursting at my seams All from figuring out what it finally means I look into a mirror and it makes me want to scream But insides my head plays a silver screen Life isn’t just black or white, but shades of gray Just like a cloudy sky, on a rainy day Fight or Flight, War or Peace, Life or Death But shades of gray brought on by decay Of bodies littering streets to close to home Blood and guts and exposed bone Ash soot and cinders on houses stone Cities growing corrupt, bankrupt, ingrown But these great graveyards still hold hope People live, fighting through all the smoke Hope for future still unknown evoked Do or Die, Love or Hate, Day or night But shades gray found only at twilight That binds the two, combines the two Just like commonalties that ties us to Everyone on earth, both old and new Does matter what race, creed, or view We’re all stuck together in the same boat So don’t try to sink it, make it float All while singing out this very note Life isn’t just black or white, but shades of gray Just like a cloudy sky, on a rainy day Left or Right, Better or Worse, boy or girl Doesn’t matter how you came to this world What matters isn’t what you take from it But what you make of it, Create from it What you awake in it, and remake in it There are no shortcuts you can take in this And resist the temptation to not coexist Try to remember my rhyme deep in your mind And remember the lines are never defined Life isn’t just black or white, but shades of gray Just like a cloudy sky, on a rainy day Life isn’t just black or white… Life isn’t just black or white… Life isn’t just black or white…
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Raven locks and emerald pools, sitting in marble carved smooth Complexities of mind rival all those of natural design And societal beliefs that rise above the norm She is the siren that sings through my storm She sings of scars, anger, and unshedded tears Themes of both of our stories written so far Emerald to gold, we exchange our pains We grow together as the storm still rains Troubled like I, scared to trust again Been scarred before, gashed deep by another Reaching out to heal those unseen wounds Reaching in hopes of seeing her love bloom Bloom like the emerald rose she is Unimaginable in beauty or form Unearthly in grace or design Unnatural one of a kind
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Jun 3, 2011
Jun 3, 2011 at 10:50 PM UTC
Emerald Rose