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strayturtle
Remember that a turtle's unedited comments come filtered through a shell. / / These are unedited comments.
The video stutters and she jitters to a halt in an intersection; Traffic lights turn green, and the display revs up, The Broken Egg food truck clips her heel and spark-like static fogs the screen. His fingers, once lightly brushing over a braille textbook, freeze out. The book lifts itself and scraps left to right under his palm. Her professor speaks, and her lecture on Maxwell's equations propagate towards the classroom wall, only the walls have fled with their chalkboards, and the standing waves have been left stranded in the sudden infinite space. She has lost reflections; only direct, brute force remains. The Truth: I wear petty images like a cloak. The Truth: My gears tremor under the strain of life, stuck on The Truth: I think You'd think me stupid, a bust, and the truth is I'd rather stand in traffic, frozen, mute and dumb, than ask questions, intern, or learn the difficult stuff. Secondary screens: I'd rather write poems and post them online for strangers than talk about chemical potentials or spherical wavefunctions. I'd rather talk about chemical potentials and wavefunctions than figure out what happened to my remote. There's too much movement to feel good standing still.
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Apr 1, 2013
Apr 1, 2013 at 3:29 PM UTC
Pause
Your story is in Spanish: a blind man visits, eats, drinks, smokes and searches your face with his fingers after dinner. To feel someone's eyes upon you, you say, is a metaphor. To feel someone's fingers on your eyelids is also a metaphor for truth. Sometimes I tunnel to know how deep the clay begins, to know "cathedral" in Spanish to know poetry in S = KlnW to know where I'm alone. When you say, "Dádivas ablandan peñas," and hand me a wild cut twine, taut with a kite, I see your scarred fingers  and know your gift is not a kite, wise with wind but the tunnel you dug and the stone in my hand crumbles
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Mar 31, 2013
Mar 31, 2013 at 11:49 PM UTC
Tunneling
public void PanicAttack(Person me){ if (!Life) return null; //Please note that no one actually dies from panic attacks! Not even me! increaseHeartRate(); increaseBreathRate(); decreaseBreathVolume(); setSkin("Flush"); setThoughtStream("Dear God I'm going to die. I've got to get out of here; I've got to get out of here; I've got to get out of here."); PanicAttack(me); }
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Mar 29, 2013
Mar 29, 2013 at 1:49 AM UTC
Psuedocode for a Panic Attack
from robin d. gill's fantastic Rise, Ye Sea Slugs!, a compilation of 1,000 Japanese Haiku on Sea Slugs because sea slug has no eyes, the poets write about them (eyeless especially seaslug's eyes haiku-in often see) The Turtle's Translation of a Translation A sea slug's eyes open only in Haiku. Slugs are blind in the water.
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Mar 29, 2013
Mar 29, 2013 at 12:40 AM UTC
the do-nothing sea slug
Life is a skin disease, and I am the finger-nail's will pressed into scratching. Life is the electronic vein under the skin of Juana's Salvese quien pueda. Life is the loop of a record or the needle's point or the vinyl ridges and I play and hear, and I see and taste and touch. I feel light pass through my skin and am projected. Life is the wall or the reel or the reacted film, but I am the light. I am the music. I am the skin. And I am the finger-nail's will pressed into scratching.
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Mar 28, 2013
Mar 28, 2013 at 11:19 PM UTC
The Skin