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raven-lee
raven-lee
I love to take advice or either hear someone else's point of view. i am diligent and i love to enjoy life as it was created. "Just as simple as that"
There is no reason by now you shouldn't care My conversation was very clear that i was creating something within me that made me love you more. It hurts sometimes that you don't understand what i say. I've done everything for you in the long run you've never told me how much you cared I give you all of me and you still leave me with nothing It hurts me that what we have or what we've created means nothing even though the beginning was rough we got through it when it was tough our *** may not seem real but to me it is confusing I'm in love with you and I know sometimes the truth is confusing hopefully you get it one day and together we can say we made the big break
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Oct 23, 2014
Oct 23, 2014 at 12:27 PM UTC
Misunderstood *** and Conversation
To the Stars, Moon, Birds, and the Bees The Warm Loving Feeling I Have Under These Trees The Feeling of Having You In My Presence Pleases Me, I Want Your Love Your companionship Just You, I Look In Your Eyes And I See An Angel From A World That Doesn't Exist On Earth Could It Be You To Be The One To Steal My Heart
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Oct 23, 2014
Oct 23, 2014 at 12:21 PM UTC
To Raven
You opened my wounds to the world The unbearable feeling I could not breathe through the night I laid down but could not go to sleep fresh opened wounds tortured me, they were so deep Unbearable,  I laid by the river that was next to me And all of sudden i fell asleep Oh, my open wounds were so deep
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Aug 27, 2014
Aug 27, 2014 at 11:13 AM UTC
Open Wounds
You may as well not bother hiding it Because I see, I know You are aware of me like you weren't before Truth tends to do that It changes transforms Reveals And you can't help but look
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Aug 27, 2014
Aug 27, 2014 at 11:03 AM UTC
I'm not staring, you're staring