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r-edwards-jr
r-edwards-jr
American Feelings & Thoughts + Pen + Paper = Poetry / / A Young Man from New Orleans with a thing for words. Any Criticism is welcomed. / / Remember, Intelligence only goes as far as you take it.
We are all aligned and no matter what surface we are on we find balance within each other. To the person who keeps me grounded... To the person who I value as a individual... To the person who I have genuine friendship with... je t'aime
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Sep 29, 2014
Sep 29, 2014 at 1:40 AM UTC
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Sometimes all the words in the world can't describe a single feeling but I see my whole future in your eyes although it might be uncertain I would Love if you were here for it.
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May 16, 2013
May 16, 2013 at 10:20 AM UTC
And I'm Feeling Good
I enter a transformation as I'm growing into the man I was meant to be I'm in the clouds as you surrender your love to me with every delicate touch This is more than what we anticipated and quite frankly we are building on each other The thoughts of your love transpire into our vows being reciting amongst the close intimacy of our family Your love is like a well taken care of flower It grows everyday I get pleasure from your soft lips as you ease in to kiss me once more I love your more now than ever as I sit in the clouds thinking about the man I have become for you
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Mar 20, 2013
Mar 20, 2013 at 11:57 AM UTC
Cloud You
Just know that my love will last and will never expire As long as your here my heart you'll have No excuses, no buts about it I'm in Love with you... Simple as that.
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Feb 2, 2013
Feb 2, 2013 at 5:51 PM UTC
Easy Love
Half-naked and can't sleep, my glasses has hit the floor it's such a shame As I Look over its 2 am, our love is about to transcend This is our history for the future Let's put it all out there All my focus is on you, I can't sleep when I think about you insomnia is in the air Your love is within me, your warm embrace is near me the moments when we are gasping for air yea babe I just took you there this love is a milestone and we will soon be playing our song And all my focus is on you, I can't sleep when I think about you
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Jan 20, 2013
Jan 20, 2013 at 8:18 PM UTC
Restless
No apologies given but yet all boundaries were crossed One shot to the heart and you are the person I called my friend Trust was something that we had but you are being viewed differently now Why are you shying away from something you clearly let happen? In the end Enjoyment and excitement was yours while pain and betrayal was mine I wanted to know your every move as every kiss and stroke was implanted upon your body I Know I wasn't the thought but the fact that you dis acknowledged it happening is making my veins show and my blood boil Trust and Believe you won't get the satisfaction of even knowing me let alone hurting me again
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Jan 6, 2013
Jan 6, 2013 at 9:19 PM UTC
Tears From A Broken Heart
With all honesty, I can't believe this is your real life You do nothing yet want so much out of life Every step you take it's being proved that you won't amount to anything And I refuse to help and contribute to your negative attitude and ways The irrelevancy in your life just cracks me up Because As the time passed by your face begin to flood with sickening tattoos Your stuck in a daze wondering why and how your life has passed you by With the first mark your purity was lost and your clarification on life was adjusted Because I laughed from the jealous looks and the words "You think your better" And In all actuality I'm not I just decided not to waste my time and its obvious that I've outgrown you But you'll be ok...... I think.
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Jan 4, 2013
Jan 4, 2013 at 10:48 PM UTC
The Mirror You Can't Avoid
Scars remain from that painful experience Shock is the look on my face as I begin wishing the clock will rewind Emotions and fear are overlapping each other Voices everywhere And there is too much going on It's that small thought in the back of my head still wondering As I try to suppress the feelings by moving on But I'm human Who am I fooling? Broken hearts and stories still remain Give it time, it shall heal everything
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Jan 2, 2013
Jan 2, 2013 at 2:34 PM UTC
Sober Up
As the days grow gloomy, I still continue to have my faith Faith outweighs any struggle But struggling often comes too much as a second hand nature No one knows about how hard it is because in the end there is still a smile You may have never experienced hard work for yourself But with a family to work for its challenging Especially everyday when you're trying, dealing with irate people and the constant attack on yourself We might know that person that wears the same clothes or That friend that can't put food on the table All you want to do is help But we break down inside and let tears come to our eyes because of the funds that we can't provide While steadily knowing that Blessings linger in the shadow just when you're about to give up Although it never crossed you're mind to do so Because of the constant tug of war with the happiness and struggle Yes, daydreams, daybreaks come when weary eyes, blistered feet, and wounded arms, are continuously working without a break It hurts after a while, like two 50 lb weights have been on your shoulders for hours--- so why keep going because there is a smile you want to see on somebody's face Even though your frowning inside Yea, it's not fair but that's life We should have more happy days than struggling days The struggle is trying to break free from these chains that have been built to hold you down But you will soon get up Looking at a brighter day Knowing that it was there all along With the smile you once knew you had that you can pass along and look back with the restraints released Yelling "I did it and I'm forever blessed"
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Dec 31, 2012
Dec 31, 2012 at 9:50 PM UTC
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As the days grow gloomy, I still continue to have my faith Faith outweighs any struggle But struggling often comes too much as a second hand nature No one knows about how hard it is because in the end there is still a smile You may have never experienced hard work for yourself But with a family to work for its challenging Especially everyday when you're trying, dealing with irate people and the constant attack on yourself We might know that person that wears the same clothes or That friend that can't put food on the table All you want to do is help But we break down inside and let tears come to our eyes because of the funds that we can't provide While steadily knowing that Blessings linger in the shadow just when you're about to give up Although it never crossed you're mind to do so Because of the constant tug of war with the happiness and struggle Yes, daydreams, daybreaks come when weary eyes, blistered feet, and wounded arms, are continuously working without a break It hurts after a while, like two 50 lb weights have been on your shoulders for hours--- so why keep going because there is a smile you want to see on somebody's face Even though your frowning inside Yea, it's not fair but that's life We should have more happy days than struggling days The struggle is trying to break free from these chains that have been built to hold you down But you will soon get up Looking at a brighter day Knowing that it was there all along With the smile you once knew you had that you can pass along and look back with the restraints released Yelling "I did it and I'm forever blessed"
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Hmmm. Getting a way sounds good I need to find my gateway to getaway Reason being everybody takes a little small piece of me everyday Like I'm becoming deteriorated I need to getaway because in this world you must look out for yourself and not worry about them other people But what to do when you have a big heart Big hearts get taken advantage of Everyday everyone wants something and it's like when does it end Fact is it never does until I do something about it But what do I do? Do I cut off loved ones stop doing things for friends or just vanish disappear But what would that prove that I can run I just rather getaway. Getaway in my mind and in my heart. I give so much of me but I never receive my pieces back but I don't know I'll getaway someday somehow.... I'll find my happiness
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Dec 31, 2012
Dec 31, 2012 at 2:06 AM UTC
Getaway