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quinton-weston
American I love to think of myself as a word artist.my favorite type of poetry is slam,but I really want to expand my horizons.I like writing about love,humanity,the power of words....i guess thats kinda cliche but their are only so many things one can write about
I sit here.Hunched over my computer computing What will become of me? This lonely mess of an almost man is mostly at wits end But just when it counts Like blanking out on a test that can’t be redone Its no one’s fault But all my fault Though statistics say you can only fail just so much But just enough to feel like maybe just one more try Just one more try Which turns into two Three Four Then You find yourself counting backwards Waiting for time to be up So you can hand in your paper So you can convince yourself its the way it had to be Or at least the way it is You look at it objectively You omit words like I and feel So you can still sleep at night Or at least not cry in plane sight So you can still fight Just one more time One more time away from oblivion Cause one is all you need For its the last step that kills you That throws you from that cliff That precipice From wince you can never return So i make sure i’m always one step behind That fine line Between giving in And getting up But eventually you get tired Of standing. Disappointed.With nothing much to show for it But a pat on the back and a better luck next time With that hope in your eyes But it hurts,almost like sand Till the tears dissolve it and all thats left is a brutal reality Thats must worse than we deserve But then you look at it objectively And know.It must be just what you deserve Which is too much for all the kind words in the world to reverse So I stand. Counting forwards. Counting backwards But always stopping at one
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Mar 11, 2013
Mar 11, 2013 at 3:44 PM UTC
Counting
I sit here.Hunched over my computer computing What will become of me? This lonely mess of an almost man is mostly at wits end But just when it counts Like blanking out on a test that can’t be redone Its no one’s fault But all my fault Though statistics say you can only fail just so much But just enough to feel like maybe just one more try Just one more try Which turns into two Three Four Then You find yourself counting backwards Waiting for time to be up So you can hand in your paper So you can convince yourself its the way it had to be Or at least the way it is You look at it objectively You omit words like I and feel So you can still sleep at night Or at least not cry in plane sight So you can still fight Just one more time One more time away from oblivion Cause one is all you need For its the last step that kills you That throws you from that cliff That precipice From wince you can never return So i make sure i’m always one step behind That fine line Between giving in And getting up But eventually you get tired Of standing. Disappointed.With nothing much to show for it But a pat on the back and a better luck next time With that hope in your eyes But it hurts,almost like sand Till the tears dissolve it and all thats left is a brutal reality Thats must worse than we deserve But then you look at it objectively And know.It must be just what you deserve Which is too much for all the kind words in the world to reverse So I stand. Counting forwards. Counting backwards But always stopping at one
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When your voice shakes,it may mean you have something powerful to say Don’t betray yourself by stifling your soul The world is so small,and life so short we take so many breathes only to sleep And waste so many more pretending to be Anything So why not use This one Or this one To say something important You already know what it is That thing your body hesitates to reiterate from your brain Whatever it may be,say it anyway Even if your feet quake Your voice shakes Or your heart breaks At least you had something to say Many don’t even become that great And that absolute truth for you May just open the gates To a reality you’d never imagined you’d face
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Feb 26, 2013
Feb 26, 2013 at 12:21 PM UTC
Wasted
You say you can't write a line? let me take you under my wing Let me teach you how to rhyme no it is not a crime,you'll shine and in time you'll compose lines and lines long enough to knit a scarf with it'll trail behind you as a monument to your greatness clothes not really your taste kid? don't worry cause thats not all you can make shiiiiit we can make it into your favorite steaks on plates or halls of fame its so close you can taste it so just be patient as we break down your hesitation while we direct you to the angle you will soon be facing a college cultural center a crowded barroom basement anywhere which you can make a statement it doesn't matter if its abrasive normally regarded tasteless as long as its something that you created i don't know how long it will take kid for time does not measure greatness however i will say this if you keep working on your craft it will transform into a spaceship to be honest it will be a while before i build my own but that don't mean we can't hone our words strong enough to cut the fuel with so say you can't make poetry again for i am determined to show you that you can
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Feb 12, 2013
Feb 12, 2013 at 9:34 PM UTC
A message to folks who don't think they can write poetry OR Let me show you how to cut rocket fuel
We don’t know what dreams are…Scientifically But we know what dreams are When we first wake,we know exactly what they are In the cold sweat of a nightmare Or the soft embrace of a perfect dream It all seems too real Fantasies and disasters play and replay in our mind In the middle of the night we close our eyes and see A world that seems right until we wake at dawns light A place of extremes and discrete details So real we could swear they occurred If only for a moment Though truly thats all we need For that second of disappointment or relief defines us Tells us what we really want But does that explain what dreams really are? Now thats a question for your mind at dawns early light If you have the mind to ask yourself at such a haunting time
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Nov 24, 2012
Nov 24, 2012 at 12:17 AM UTC
Explaining Dreams and Nightmares
Tender hearts hurt most blood seeps from the most neutral touch most recognize their fragility But not all have sympathy For many have hardened their hearts to survive “so why not they?” “why should they be spared the pain?” again and again the heart beats,whether calloused or not All are fraught with misery Both the tender and hard-hearted which proves that neither by design has been harder fought All hearts strive to beat,and despise being beaten And all deserve reprieve from their degree of weeping
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Nov 24, 2012
Nov 24, 2012 at 12:15 AM UTC
In the Garden
Tender hearts hurt most blood seeps from the most neutral touch most recognize their fragility But not all have sympathy For many have hardened their hearts to survive “so why not they?” “why should they be spared the pain?” again and again the heart beats,whether calloused or not All are fraught with misery Both the tender and hard-hearted which proves that neither by design has been harder fought All hearts strive to beat,and despise being beaten And all deserve reprieve from their degree of weeping
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Nov 24, 2012
Nov 24, 2012 at 12:14 AM UTC
All Hearts
File my heart under fragile For it hasn’t been handled with care for so long That I forget it wasn’t made to withstand such torture The brochure that came in the box said “no warrantee available” And that didn’t seem a problem since it wasn’t too tangible But that in no my made its protection manageable See it has this defect where it attaches to people it deems loveable But its assessments are usually miserable The results of such endeavors seem ironically laughable And in the end it sits in a stagnant pool of blood and tears I stir it like a fool would, and drain it when its too full But it doesn’t stop from making the same mistakes This stupid piece of flesh I hate twists when I seem right as rain Theirs no warrantee, no cash back, no trade So what happens when it finally breaks? Well its obvious and it gives me shakes But I rake in all the love I can Hoping to be a better man Despite this heart that hurts too much Trusts too much That seems to be best at collecting dust In hopes that I can keep it going as long as possible Even through making attachments that aren’t too logical For it could **** me to bear it But I really wish to share it So if I perish in the process, I guess its my fault For putting it in harms way, when I really know better
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Nov 24, 2012
Nov 24, 2012 at 12:13 AM UTC
File My Heart Under Fragile,But Don’t Be Afraid To Hold It Tight
Everybody hurts just a little too much Everybody hurts but it's never enough It's wonderful to fall; let's love and risk it all The call to relief overwhelms us Because we hurt a lot, and we want it to stop Love is like a rock in the fall Cool to the touch, but rough when struck blunt And when struck it wakes us up Then drenched in sweat we can’t ignore Not the wound, nor its source It was love that slammed itself into us And nearly comatose from its ****** we rebound with distrust Forevermore we step back, waiting out the strike Living in timidity of future loves of our lives For if we commit to love too much, then the strike could destroy us So we love with half a heart, so as not to be hurt. So we live safe as we move from stone to stone But I think we should grab it tight, despite what we fear I'd rather love just a little too much. Not enough to prematurely erode the stone But enough to never slip my hold So much so that it will only drop if I choose to let it go Yes it hurts to grab it tight And it hurts to feel the strike But holding on firmly is the only way to be sure Sure its not a flight response Sure its really what we want For what gives us our most lumps,may be what’s best for us Living in fear will always hold us back So I hold a little too tight Thinking maybe you might reciprocate and smile
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Mar 1, 2012
Mar 1, 2012 at 9:06 PM UTC
Hold Tight
I used to scream and shout. ya see I had to get them out. I could never get them right.so I felt some odd delight in grabbing their attention In the warmth of that spotlight. I didn’t care if I was an octave too high, because I had their eyes, I had their ears. I wanted to move them to tears, so they could feel how I feel, then I wouldn’t feel so bad. I wanted an avenue for attention. Why not? I’ll be the only one on the stage. I’d think, “look at me here” and “all I want is for you to look and hear” but that’s so childish, so selfish, so not what I wanted to be so I needed a new reason to write and to speak. And I’ll admit some of that selfishness is still there, but I’m prepared to do much more than just make people see me. I want to inspire the next needy artist I want people when they think of me to want to work their hardest. True I want people to fall in love with my words, but I want the lines and verbs to do more than just impress. I want them to absorb what I’m speaking. I want them to speak back. I Want to see what you have to say just to see if maybe it’ll affect me too. And if you do maybe we can sit and talk for a few.
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Mar 1, 2012
Mar 1, 2012 at 9:03 PM UTC
Spotlight
Our world falls down like a house of cards. And again were forced to build it back up but its never the same. We forget the ace, the eight, and a few of the spades. And it makes a difference. We become indifferent to each others pain at times And time again we retreat to a false sense of intimacy. Which fools us into thinking we love each other Not to say we don’t love one another but **** Why must it always take a trip to the bedroom to feel better? I mean yeah its an attention grabber and hell yeah I’m a go getter but I’d sooner believe it was butter before I think the phrase I uttered to you or you uttered to me had any real meaning, least not while were squirming under the sheets ; only there cause it seems the right place to be WELL JEEZE maybe you shouldn’t ask me my opinion if its hard to swallow. do you want the red one or the blue one? The one that makes you forget or the one that makes you admit that nothing’s perfect, least of all us. Way too fragile to ignore the wind We got to make sure this house doesn’t come down again. Better yet tear it down now (blows) For we need a better foundation. You want satisfaction? Have a little patience for every time we rebuild we go a little higher which means if we don’t fix this soon it could all come tumbling down….hard. and we’ll end up suffocated beneath the cards and the ******** And the longing And the tension will do nothing but **** us. So lets not rush through this. Just a little bit at a time. Level by level Emotion by emotion Trust by trust. Love by love. Card by card. and if we keep at it not only will we set a world record but our skyscraper will scratch the heavens and more than anyone else will leave each other breathless.
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Mar 1, 2012
Mar 1, 2012 at 9:01 PM UTC
It All Comes Tumbling Down
Our world falls down like a house of cards. And again were forced to build it back up but its never the same. We forget the ace, the eight, and a few of the spades. And it makes a difference. We become indifferent to each others pain at times And time again we retreat to a false sense of intimacy. Which fools us into thinking we love each other Not to say we don’t love one another but **** Why must it always take a trip to the bedroom to feel better? I mean yeah its an attention grabber and hell yeah I’m a go getter but I’d sooner believe it was butter before I think the phrase I uttered to you or you uttered to me had any real meaning, least not while were squirming under the sheets ; only there cause it seems the right place to be WELL JEEZE maybe you shouldn’t ask me my opinion if its hard to swallow. do you want the red one or the blue one? The one that makes you forget or the one that makes you admit that nothing’s perfect, least of all us. Way too fragile to ignore the wind We got to make sure this house doesn’t come down again. Better yet tear it down now (blows) For we need a better foundation. You want satisfaction? Have a little patience for every time we rebuild we go a little higher which means if we don’t fix this soon it could all come tumbling down….hard. and we’ll end up suffocated beneath the cards and the ******** And the longing And the tension will do nothing but **** us. So lets not rush through this. Just a little bit at a time. Level by level Emotion by emotion Trust by trust. Love by love. Card by card. and if we keep at it not only will we set a world record but our skyscraper will scratch the heavens and more than anyone else will leave each other breathless.
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