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pxstelpetals
pxstelpetals
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i used to hate fullstops i hated the way they ended stories which i never wanted to see ending i hated the way they sit on the side of a page thinking that they had the authority to stop. and restart i hated the way they didn't signify a beginning, only an end and the possibility of things continuing were never certain but what was certain, was it's end poetry‘s not meant to be certain it's not meant to close up a story with a single line or a single rhyme must less a single dot but then your life starts spinning and suddenly you're looking at this tiny dot and just wishing it could appear in your life so that your story can finally end.
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Aug 28, 2015
Aug 28, 2015 at 7:58 PM UTC
fullstops
i used to think poetry was alliteration, assonance, rhyme and rhythm literary devices like onomatopoeia but then i found the number of people who wrote poetry about love hurt, pain, brokenness numbness then i realised poetry was simply being touched by you being cut up and forced to live with bleeding wrists and a bleeding heart the blood left on the sheets that's what poems are made of
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Aug 22, 2015
Aug 22, 2015 at 10:02 AM UTC
poetry
ever felt so many emotions you went numb ever heard silence so loud it was deafening ever saw light so bright all you saw was darkness because your life is a paradox you gave it too much meaning now it means nothing at all
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Aug 18, 2015
Aug 18, 2015 at 8:44 AM UTC
paradox
you know how it feels to be ditched and thrown away, yet you ask me why i'm wary of people. you know how much it hurts to be broken down, yet you ask me why i’m wary of people. you know how it feels to be betrayed by those closest to you, yet you ask me why i’m wary of people. you already know why i'm wary of people, yet you still ask me why.
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Aug 18, 2015
Aug 18, 2015 at 8:36 AM UTC
why i'm wary of people
your palm on my neck my back against the wall hush you said so seal my lips i did but seal my lips is all i ever did and when things go wrong still you made me seal my lips they stay shut now so even if you ask me how my day went or how things at home are or whether i still or would ever love you - my lips they stay shut
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Aug 16, 2015
Aug 16, 2015 at 8:43 AM UTC
Untitled
i don't want to feel this way but this is the only way i feel
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May 25, 2014
May 25, 2014 at 9:56 AM UTC
feel
Would I still be a poet if none of my works are read?
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May 2, 2014
May 2, 2014 at 9:07 AM UTC
A Poet or Not?
Emotions are like a vast ocean; there are small, large currents You're the largest current, the largest tidal wave i experience, in the deep depths of my tummy Your scent, i can smell it Those waves knock me over, leaving me gasping for air Your bright eyes, they're beautiful The currents pull me from below, i can't breathe Walking past you, you swept me off my feet I'm now drowning, in the large endless sea "Maybe it wasn't meant to be," You walked away from me, it meant truly nothing to you The waves engulfed me I'm sinking, my limp body within your very currents They said emotions are like a vast ocean, you were the whole **** sea.
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Apr 19, 2014
Apr 19, 2014 at 2:24 AM UTC
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