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patrick-takacs
American Patrick Takacs, 18 years old. I have to say I fell in love in about 6 months with this amazing girl. When it got tough I just held it together. I started writing after I cleaned up. Makes me feel free.
Remember, Oh remember, September 11 9 years ago on this day A attack on the US was made Remember those who have fallen Because not a single one is forgotten Those who past for our freedom Please think about what this day means This is a part of our history It is not long before you hear.... Mom, Dad, Grandpa, Grandma, Aunt, Uncle What happened on September 11, 2001.
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Sep 11, 2010
Sep 11, 2010 at 10:13 AM UTC
Oh Please Remember
Excuse me, yes you I’ve fallen and I can’t get up My heart is hurting; I’m bout to throw up Why am I struggling to get up? Can you help me, I’m shaking too much. The pain I go through day by day, All of the mistake I try to vade Once I felt it, it was never the same I Pray you do not have to feel this pain
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Jun 11, 2010
Jun 11, 2010 at 2:14 PM UTC
Excuse me, yes you.
There is not a day that goes by When I don’t look at the bright blue sky Thinking how is life on the other side Is it better than this place that I hide?
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Jun 11, 2010
Jun 11, 2010 at 2:05 PM UTC
How is it?
By the sad word goodbye It's hard to believe One word can make so many cry A loss too many A team fallen apart Can one bad play Really break so many hearts A different religion A different race Why can't we See the hurt on their face A broken heart A divided team A cry for help A shattered dream.
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Jun 11, 2010
Jun 11, 2010 at 1:29 PM UTC
We all lose, sometimes.
Abolish your dreams Why cant you see, you abolish your dreams You couldn’t hold on, to what you had Because of me, you abolish your dreams I shouldn’t of held you back Move on as fast as you can Just try to forget your past It can no longer last You abolish your dreams And it was all because of me Please forget me, and move on Move on as fast as you can Just leave the past Try to get out of here at last
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Jun 11, 2010
Jun 11, 2010 at 1:29 PM UTC
Destroyed Dreams
Sitting under a tree A you without a me My heart is inoperable If it is just me As our hands clasp We can run from the past There is no medicine for the pain Only you can make it go away We can be inseparable That is, you and me We can Fly away, into the sky We can fade away into the moon light We can sail away into the ocean or we can just rest tonight.
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Jun 11, 2010
Jun 11, 2010 at 1:28 PM UTC
She is...
Where the mountains touch the sky my dreams are, where the birds fly Please take me, take me now Someway, someday, somehow Do you see what I need, I need you now I follow the beat of 1, 2 ,3 I still wait for you and me to be All I can think of is your smile The smile you have every time we hold hands The smile you have when you laugh Your smile on a sunny day Your smile even when it rains Does a dreamer not dream or is this dream just for me
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Jun 11, 2010
Jun 11, 2010 at 1:28 PM UTC
A Smile in a Dream
Funny things you notice when you are thinking P rhymes with V, Just like you and me The beach waves, really don't wave A is more than a letter T also rhymes with P and V, That T puts you and me together
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Jun 11, 2010
Jun 11, 2010 at 1:23 PM UTC
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