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nickolas-lawson
American I have always questioned my writing abilities. I am still unsure as to what qualifies as poetry. I guess I know what I like, I write what I feel, and my mind takes me in various directions. Please let me know your thoughts pertaining towards my writings and whether or not they should qualify as poetry.
Passing moments between unmet strangers are like shadows in the dark. One cannot see them but they are still there. A knowing glance passed between them is all that is shared, but the cobblestones glean more.
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May 23, 2010
May 23, 2010 at 8:59 PM UTC
Unmet Stragers
Something to hold and feel, something real. Something for my soul. Everything that’s tangible, eventually goes. Untried, untested, mishaps are my fears. A waking soul, is it here?
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May 23, 2010
May 23, 2010 at 8:58 PM UTC
Tangible
How sweet it is To taste the air Of a summer breeze. Fragrant, Crisp, Alive. How cool it is To feel the shadow Of a sweltering heat. Simple pleasures easily obtained That are simply unnoticed By the hurried eye.
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May 23, 2010
May 23, 2010 at 8:57 PM UTC
Simple Pleasures
Upon a sea of Longing and loneliness, I spied a vessel Traveling East. I hailed to the captain To take me aboard And carry me towards The light. He stopped And dropped anchor But as I tried to board, He stopped me short And stated – Now Isn’t the time.
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May 23, 2010
May 23, 2010 at 8:56 PM UTC
Not yet
Caring, Loving, Understanding Needing something, very demanding Just to be loved in return Is all that you are asking Persistent, Constant, Unrelenting Contentions, yours are never bending Maybe life is still unfolding Maybe strife is in the molding Of your life and in mine I have your traits Good and bad I have your tastes Including dads Wanting, Craving, Longing Desire Addictive needs That never tire Simple luxuries We both require Sometimes just a Camp side fire I have your charm I have your passion I have your love I have your fashion In all my life There was compassion From you My mom My one satisfaction
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May 23, 2010
May 23, 2010 at 8:55 PM UTC
Mom
In the aftermath of A spring rain The world seems so Dreary. But if you listen closely You can hear the sounds Of an awakening life. Yes the ground is wet And the clouds are still gray Nevertheless, the grass I bet Smells better than The previous day. The birds slowly Start singing, the earth’s heart Slowly starts beating, And with it comes the Promise of another Perfect day.
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May 23, 2010
May 23, 2010 at 8:54 PM UTC
Different Outlook
This is me you little **** you Think I am not your enemy But I breathe hate and destroy Fate- like you really even give a **** **** off, die, slip and cut your life on mine Try and see that I hate you and want you To find a new way to end
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May 23, 2010
May 23, 2010 at 8:52 PM UTC
Blood hate
Cynical smile Cold stone heart Cracked inner core Unrelenting bursts Of anger With love’s cool waters The fire subsides Distant, but here Treading through Life’s seas, Sailing In thought’s breeze Grasping, holding But no luck The cards stacked Against my favor Where is my captain My driver, my stead Why my longing My greed, my need He’s gone forever He never was. Over and over searching in vain What is the agenda Where are we going? Crazy- I once thought. Sane? just maybe. What about the others What ones? Where are they? The simpletons They’re hiding out in the gray. How many of us have looked at it? What did we feel? a calming sense of being Insignificant? a sense of wanting To know the stars? What is this creature This thing, this man? I see only the ripped Torn, worn, burnt Sewn together remains Of a child. Broken body Borrowed time- A little sadness A little pain, a little party. A little Just a bit more eh? What does the master need- Little gain.
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May 23, 2010
May 23, 2010 at 8:51 PM UTC
A little pain
Sell me your god-thing That I might contemplate It’s face Where is my misplaced Faith Along the edges of My dream-scape reality I have never found Any measure of grace Maybe it has been Buried along with The ashes of time Loan me your Idol That I might Worship and bow While babies and ladies And toys of my youth Are mutilated and tossed aside where is this prophet of ages past where is my lot to be cast gods and demons and devils called divas have all led me astray sell me your god-thing your play-thing your toy sell me your rosary his crucifix your joy allow me to borrow your kabbalah your quran your bible your talmud your kebra negast give me your god-thing that I might have peace at last send with it your lamentations your reservations your contemplations but keep your wisdom I have found mine in the vast
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May 23, 2010
May 23, 2010 at 8:45 PM UTC
Sell me your God-thing
Interspersed upon the leaves the drops dissipate calling for hate, lust and vileness. Blood, the life of the universe. Falling blue and red and erroneous shades of black. Use some pills, drills, and saws – rip and tear and find the truth hidden inside the beast. What is contained besides the bile, filth and caustic, abrasive greed?
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May 22, 2010
May 22, 2010 at 10:55 PM UTC
Intrinsic Black