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katie666
katie666
American Hey so I am a poet who didn't even know it! :P Totally cheesy, however I consider this place like my blog, and any and all feedback is awesome! If you have any suggestions I'd love to hear it. Not a great poet, but still want a poem of some sort? Give me the details and I'd love to write some for you. I find it challenging to write on the fly and most of my poems are first drafts, if you think they need editing tell me. I am not afraid of criticism. would love feedback. Thanks for checking me and my poems out, and I hope you enjoy. :D
I don't like this reality I live in I do not like it with its "Fox News" I do not like it with any false facts I do not like this President Obama I do not like his ad campaign I dislike having my rights revoked He does not care here or there I don't think he cares anywhere! I want my rights right here and right now! I do not like Obama's Change I do not like this Uncle Sam! I do not like the rules or ways Look out world here I come with diversity and wayward thinking This is my flag these are my new ways If I don't like the change in the world then I will be the change that I want to see so let me be Let me live in the land that was once free Obama can keep his change I can provide my own
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Apr 22, 2013
Apr 22, 2013 at 2:50 PM UTC
Reality
How do I say that I am sorry For the words that I've said
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Apr 22, 2013
Apr 22, 2013 at 2:28 AM UTC
Bluntness
It's such a far away dream It seems like just yesterday we were hugging kissing and cuddling under the mistletoe Now I just don't know It seems so far away, like an old forgotten dream. We were close you and I Now we past by like strangers in the wind I look up at you you stare back at me We both remember the old forgotten dream....      We both once shared.... both shared this... Dream
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Apr 22, 2013
Apr 22, 2013 at 2:25 AM UTC
far away dream
I forgot the lyrics I forgot the melody to the song called love Sing me the song old lover sing me the song old friend How did they drown that night? the two lost lovers did drown at midnight. They drowned in the middle of the night. they fought for love they fought for life eternal. true love brought them together that night they took each others hand, said lets go skinny dippin for the very last time. See they were rebels, they were fighters who wanted for their love. And they got caught, skinny dippin at night they held each others hands tight and Never let go... You see I forgot the tale of the two dead lovers that were starry eyed Held fate in their hands and decided to swim for love. Yet they both drowned holding each others hand. Lets remember not to fight lets remember not to love for the two dead lovers did sadly drown at night I want to live not for you, or anyone else I am greedy I am selfish lets forget how to love and never look back at the two lovers who did drown
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Apr 22, 2013
Apr 22, 2013 at 2:24 AM UTC
two dead lovers
I used to believe in the land of liberty and the land of the free There once was a place where there were no laws for none were needed in this magical place called America Where English was spoken there was no "dial one" Where God ruled the land with his firm hand Where people trusted each other where did this land go? Where did the people go? Where are my brothers in arms that fought beside me in 'nam We worked at the barns and we worked with the cattle We stayed up from dawn til dusk The cowboys who used to roam now sad and alone do they sit Singing to the blue corn moon Telling tales of days now old This country now gone and wasted Corporations outgrew the family farm Greed overtook love and the country that used to have morals freedom liberty justice now all corrupt due to Televisions wealth cellphones laptops random things we really don't need over took my land of liberty This is a song of sorrow lost love and how one nation under GOD is now a nation without
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Apr 18, 2013
Apr 18, 2013 at 12:01 AM UTC
Freedom
Each person still free to be the person they want to be To fly and to grow to flourish and to learn For this is ideal this is perfection Within a relationship one hides the skeletons puts on a show Yet when the truth is revealed will you hide? ...From me? Each night I lie awake thinking pondering hoping that someday I can show you Myself Unapologetic This is who I am I am no longer ashamed I am proud of who I am No more baggage no more chains Together lets fly free of this world create a new passion for life and liberty and free will lets find out the truth together and we will fight our demons Lets fall in love with all our imperfections and all our flaws Lets get this on and get through this together we stand STRONG
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Apr 17, 2013
Apr 17, 2013 at 11:52 PM UTC
Together we stand STRONG
Here I am Lost and confused wanting to quit wanting to give up give up Searching for my inner strength Searching for my Identity who am i? Who am I? That I'd give up on me When everyone's gone and abandoned when hope seems to be all but lost.... you just hold on hold on to hope to love to life to God one must believe there is a purpose to all this chaos There is no book nor manual or directions to this life mistakes shall be made We'll turn around and I'll find you and you'll find me... Together life shall be in perfect harmony It will be beautifully distorted, with images and ugly scars but that's not the reason why we chose each other. I love you and you love me We look past all of this and together we live in perfect harmony like a garden left and abandoned with no sun or rays of hope with a lack of water The plant should dwindle Yet the magic is found within because that's where the beauty appears So don't give up and don't lose hope Don't forget to love and forgive This is your life write your own tale make the mistakes find the hidden trail own what you can give when you can Just don't give up and don't lose hope Don't forget to love and forgive I know its cliche but since we only do live once make it count own your story and your problems and together we can become one of the Greats
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Apr 15, 2013
Apr 15, 2013 at 1:21 PM UTC
Life
Senior year filled with bliss Senior year full of lists life lessons we've all learned no Qur'an to be burned acceptance and tolerance is taught things we ought not do and things we ought to skipping classes oh what fun getting lots of essays never done enough We've all got pretty tough after four years time spent on homework friends experiencing life is defiantly sublime getting ready for the future yet we still cant see the whole **** picture kind of nervous kind of scared at the end of the year when we'll really see who really cared to be true friends til the bitter end through all our ups and all our downs clean out the friend list get ready for the plunge each day is another last memories we shall forget names that used to have purpose are now found meaningless find a purpose find a place society dictates this is our anthem that although times are bad working is all you have each election getting meaner every day a little harder HOPE MY *** this is all a clever lie high school teaches us so much yet none is remembered none is obtained vague concepts taught to the blind masses When will the people learn? To STAND UP Stand up against corruption and illegal government spending-WHOOPS guess that was left outta the text books Stay civil stay sane Follow the "American culture" Eat fat stay thin this is hypocrisy we now live in Vote for Republican Vote for Democrat doesn't matter in the end they are the same Abercrombie and Fitch VS Hollister Same brand different label Don't you see? Can't you see? This hypocrisy.... is real as real as you or Me End of line
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Feb 11, 2013
Feb 11, 2013 at 2:17 AM UTC
old poem i found
Senior year filled with bliss Senior year full of lists life lessons we've all learned no Qur'an to be burned acceptance and tolerance is taught things we ought not do and things we ought to skipping classes oh what fun getting lots of essays never done enough We've all got pretty tough after four years time spent on homework friends experiencing life is defiantly sublime getting ready for the future yet we still cant see the whole **** picture kind of nervous kind of scared at the end of the year when we'll really see who really cared to be true friends til the bitter end through all our ups and all our downs clean out the friend list get ready for the plunge each day is another last memories we shall forget names that used to have purpose are now found meaningless find a purpose find a place society dictates this is our anthem that although times are bad working is all you have each election getting meaner every day a little harder HOPE MY *** this is all a clever lie high school teaches us so much yet none is remembered none is obtained vague concepts taught to the blind masses When will the people learn? To STAND UP Stand up against corruption and illegal government spending-WHOOPS guess that was left outta the text books Stay civil stay sane Follow the "American culture" Eat fat stay thin this is hypocrisy we now live in Vote for Republican Vote for Democrat doesn't matter in the end they are the same Abercrombie and Fitch VS Hollister Same brand different label Don't you see? Can't you see? This hypocrisy.... is real as real as you or Me End of line
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this is a poem dedicated to those who have finished with their story This is for those who lost a dear friend this is to those few who finished reading a beloved book To the happy endings to the sorrow that is ever lasting Until you open a new book This is for those who don't read the last chapter hang on to hope for all its worth. this is for the dreamers and the believers. I hang onto hope and false beliefs and lies hypocrisy just to be happy for one dwindling moment a fleeting second gone. the last sentence read. where to begin? Where to begin? I start to write my own tale one that will never end add a sentence here... and there pass it on to my prodigy have them add their twist to the tale here is to the ever lasting here is to no more endings Lets write never forget never give up hold onto the pen never stopping hardly thinking letting the characters flow from the pen just write write write
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Feb 11, 2013
Feb 11, 2013 at 1:59 AM UTC
The never ending story
This is me a girl whose trying to fall in love The girl who forgot her way I want to love I do There's just no spark no fire nor flame He is here He is good to me So why can't I fall in love tonight? There's nothing here emptiness
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Feb 10, 2013
Feb 10, 2013 at 12:19 PM UTC
This is me