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jonah-c-mcneil
jonah-c-mcneil
I like writing. Feel free to send me feedback or ideas to make my poems better.
It's called falling in love Because every fall, Has a bottom.
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Jul 3, 2014
Jul 3, 2014 at 2:59 AM UTC
The Fall
Sometimes the worst Is knowing They didn't love you back... That they didn't need you Didn't want you Didn't appreciate you Didn't think of you Didn't love you Like you did them
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Jul 3, 2014
Jul 3, 2014 at 2:56 AM UTC
Loveless
It's over It's finally done I can taste the finish of it But it's my only release Nothing else comes close You become breathless Even weightless I need it Or perhaps, I desperately want it It's not fair To end it so close to the start I feel this longing For it to go on and on Life in a nutshell, ***** But with this **** The world melts My worries are gone Just a tad more But I hold off For those hard days For those dreadful nights The waking nightmares And fleeting dreams It's on these days On these nights Where I sit back Relax and... Light another cigarette.
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Jul 3, 2014
Jul 3, 2014 at 2:40 AM UTC
What I Need
There's a magical place in the forest Where fairies go to cultivate Flutter around with verses and rhyme Sweet poetry they make They frolic amongst the Verbs and nouns Plucking flowers and synonyms Joining hands and ripe phrases Create odes they want to sing Cross pollinating the pieces of poetry With different story lines Fertilizing with a purpose In the growing of the rhyme. Their dainty feet Sow similie  seeds, And their deft little hands Root out mispelled weeds. Then they whisper the words to the passing breeze Who takes words, caresses them, And floats with ease. They travel and roam Off to distant pastures new Where they settle And blossom into a muse. Then implant in the mind Of a resting poet Enter his thoughts and views Who upon waking Will stretch, smile and write, And continue to grow and enthuse.
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May 20, 2014
May 20, 2014 at 9:44 PM UTC
The Secret garden (co-written with Mike Hauser)
I stand there waiting anticipation is a killer really its all about faking but right before its such a thriller I here that magical sound, and the lights come on and now its going, now i'm bound in a spell and the world is gone It's just me and them, they listen to all i say and see all i do and that feeling is like a precious gem until its time to finally say adieu then the world is back and the feeling is gone. and it feels like an anxiety attack because now i'm back to anon but those precious moments are worth it the world thinks i'm a cheater because i will not submit **** i love theatre!
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May 19, 2014
May 19, 2014 at 11:18 PM UTC
What A Rush
When I look into the mirror, i dont know what i should see my reflection is unclear should i see the younger me? The days have come and gone the years have flown by now its time to say bye dad, by mom you've given me the tools i need to fly When i look into the mirror, i see myself for who i am a young man full of excitment and fear, but dont worry sir, madame This is not a farewell, but a thank you it's a new chapter for me to excel without you two i wouldn't know what to do I love You Mom I Love You Dad mom, thanks for being so calm dad, thanks for teaching me to add When i look into the mirror, i know what i see something i know won't disappear the love you have for me...
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May 19, 2014
May 19, 2014 at 9:21 PM UTC
To My Parents.