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jiwee
If, in this cosmic dance you have not yet had the feeling of wanting to go ocean-deep you have not yet realised we are immortal souls floating in temporary bodies in deep, deep existence of time and space where nothing is impossible nor out of limits In this free world where you do not get to choose the ones you love nor love the ones you choose where the flesh desires what it knows and each and every atom in someone else becomes your every and only wish, then you can understand who you truly are if you can walk away but choose to stay So tell me, have you ever had the feeling of wanting to go ocean-deep?
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May 6
May 6, 2026 at 2:13 AM UTC
Ocean-deep
I was given gloves to fight the world, they were put on my hands. Far away from my people and my own safe lands. Had to struggle for a while, had to crawl through the sands the cubicle life wasn't for me, its no place to make bands. "Settle in your place dont stray from the safety valley" they used to tell me this and they did it oh-so gladly, luckily for me, I never latched on too those antics. Realised my calling, it wasn't near those semantics. You gotta move on, see past, stratify your tactic. Remember where you've wronged, go forth, never be static. Didn't expect to be led through the fires of tragic but in the darkest of oceans, lies the greatest of magic. all my struggles you see.. They introduced me to my passion.
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May 6
May 6, 2026 at 2:08 AM UTC
Gloves to fight the world
If the soul was ever free, I think mine would have left. It would be somewhere else, rather than this body of torturous depth. My soul would never accept the things, my mortal flesh cant reject. My soul would not be lonely; it’d have friends and be blessed. My soul would be singing and dancing, cherishing each breath It would be loving and giving, my soul would be the best. If my soul was free, I think it would want to just be, or maybe, There is no soul, there is just me. If my soul was ever free, id be happy for it too be.
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May 5
May 5, 2026 at 10:04 AM UTC
Is the soul, really free?