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j-hov
American Trying to get into this whole writing thing. Thought I would start off to see if people like what I have to say. Would really love some feedback.
I go back to that precious place on the lake The hill overlooking the world A tranquil perspective Where peace of mind can be secured But we cannot sit here forever No matter how hard we try We always have to descend back down To a world full of angst A world congested with immoral moral compasses But even just a few hours spent With a view such as this, I wonder.... That maybe..... Just maybe........... We are closer to heaven than we recognize With the sun setting behind the rolling hill And silhouettes lengthening behind us Looking into the ideal At the mouth of this cave We unearth what is real… Subjects still imprisoned by their own ignorance With the glimmering warmth of a fictitious blaze From the deceptive flames of a fabricated fire Faintly whispering up against their backs The puppeteers' handiwork betrays them Splattering superficial illusions Along a dull ill-defined canvas Becoming aware of their elusive scheme We broke from the inhibiting chains Liberating our confiscated minds We deplored the fraudulent portrayals on the wall Abandoning these projected shadows We emerged from this somber fallacy Bringing to light A consequential validity.... Mind over matter, A beautiful reality A breathtaking ideal Scatter the truth and let it unfurl Climb towards the sun On top of the hill overlooking the world
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Oct 7, 2013
Oct 7, 2013 at 8:18 AM UTC
The Hill Overlooking the World
Like the cigarette burn on my left forearm You left a mark A mark that reminds me That you were here Reminds me of a time When the colors were vibrant with life These struggles put the strain Of anxiety on my soul Lost ever since that mark was seared Now looking for the light The love To remove The one that left the mark on my heart
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Oct 7, 2013
Oct 7, 2013 at 3:36 AM UTC
The one that left the mark on my heart