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friesday
friesday
23/F/Msia New to writing. I appreciate feedback and constructive criticism :)
Didn't want to write but you made me sad again.
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Jul 9, 2017
Jul 9, 2017 at 5:13 AM UTC
Sad Poem #1 (10w)
Learn to love, Yourself before You learn to love Somebody else And be the love You feel and not The love that You would sell In flaw, calls change If will remains - In fear, Find strength yet again Don't reach for those Who let the door close You'll meet them Once again In the end Find yourself, And find the friends Who made you, Who you are again Love and feel, Or hate and repeal But act on just What is real Be and let be, Leave memory But more importantly Make yourself free And none had you lost, But all could see None made you fall, As did she Rise like before, As love does adore The soul that would try Just once more Learn to love Yourself before You learn to love Somebody else Live, dont regret Don't forget Who you are Ready, Get set, You will go far.
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May 22, 2017
May 22, 2017 at 3:46 PM UTC
A Poet's Plea
I don’t write often I can’t rhyme for **** I’m still figuring out My vocabulary’s limit Who am I kidding? I lack such dimension To find hidden meaning In rap lyrics, let alone alliteration. How many syllables in a stanza? I stopped keeping count How many more horrible poems Until I acquire a Hello Poetry account? To be very honest As I typed this at 10 in the morning My inspiration was heartbreak And some bottled up feelings So for the time being, I shall improve on wordplay The sad poems can come later When he leaves me in disarray.
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May 22, 2017
May 22, 2017 at 12:59 PM UTC
Hello, poetry?