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eyal-lavi
eyal-lavi
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Thrice he knocked upon her door "May I enter?" he implored. "I bid the welcome" Were her words Thus he entered Solemnly Into the chamber Were the bed The night they wed Had marked the first- -and last as well When both their bodies... Intertwined... Had layed in bliss... Her lips, her kiss... All he had missed... And dreamed and yearned... Just to return And look into her auburn eyes And feel the love he was denied Then twice he bent upon his knee And then he stood And then he looked And thus he saw It wasn't she Not she who loved him on that night Indeed he knows she never did. And yet if only- "No, not ever," were her words. "But"- "Never ever will you be the man I loved, of this be sure." So sure was she. "I disagree," was all he thought Though words came not What point to speak. "There is no point," were words he heard From lips, her lips Her kiss, pure bliss Was not to be. END PART ONE
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Sep 4, 2017
Sep 4, 2017 at 6:28 PM UTC
Thrice, Twice... part one
I Don't Like the summer breeze Nor the chilling winter Freeze Autumn makes me think of death And spring is when all life awakes
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Sep 3, 2017
Sep 3, 2017 at 8:52 AM UTC
I Don't Like
You little **** oh boy you reek What did you eat, you little **** And what's your name? And what's this game you seem to play You find it fun to **** around? Of boy that's you across the street Why ain't you wearing any leash? Oh no, don't, please, stay on that side DONT CROSS THE STREEET you little **** Hot-dang you did you little... Cute thing, your eyes they speak, love love love is what I hear?! Ok, I guess, you're not a **** You're too **** cute and you don't reek I love you too, I guess I do How 'bout I find a doggy treat? Your floppy ears, your wagging tale Ok you won my heart so stop Don't follow me go on go **** Somewhere away from where I stand But extra points for ******** in sand Or grass or anywhere but here Where ***** like I might step on it And get real mad and not just think You are a dog it's not your fault I'm sure if you were ***** trained you'd surely use it... Wouldn't you? Oh hell, who cares, you're too dame cute so anyway Please say that's it's ok And you're not hurt I didn't think I'm such a **** And you're just perfect aren't you? You love love love Now I love you!
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Aug 27, 2017
Aug 27, 2017 at 5:26 AM UTC
You Little ****
*NOTE: this is the 1st poem I wrote and posted on HePo. I've managed to finish the first 2 parts and have been struggling with the 3rd; however much of last night was spent refining this initial section so I figured I'd post it in the hopes of receiving some constructive feedback. Thanks. -E.Lavi ************* Dripdripdripdrip drip as it slips all it’s secrets, secrets slipped from the lip of the rusty metal moldy faucet, water whispers water whimpers water wishes of a time long gone; dripping water ever swirling round the beaten bolted sink; bolted to a wooden floor, chipped and nicked and cracked but grips, it grips the sink and won’t let go. Secrets swirling round the sink into the void and through the pipes beneath the wooden boards of floor which would let loose their life-long grip of one worn weathered tired tethered reddish tinted rusty sink if only it - the wood! - if it could leave the floor it; the wood would stand and stretch and scratch and then would walk right out the door; wooden boards held hostage by a layered web of iron nails nailed years ago. Creaking boards tell tales to pipes which snake throughout the secret house; Drip they drip they speak they slip through lips of sinks the secrets silent lip they drip and slip andio they rip and drip andrip they drip they dripdrip they ripipip i i… Hush the whisper of the wind through broken windows rattles timber breaks the slumber of the man whose face is etched and leathered ever marked by hands of time; time played games the game of life the old man thought and thinks he still can stand and stretch and scratch then walk straight through the door and out the house, like secrets lost in rusty pipes he thinks he’ll walk into the dark and be whisked off on wings of wind which carries whispers rattles windows speaks in drips through rusty lips of bolted sinks gripped by the floors forever more and so the man will sit he sits and thinks and thinks he drips and drips drips dripdripipip i i i... End Part 1
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Aug 26, 2017
Aug 26, 2017 at 6:16 AM UTC
Drip Drip Drip - Part 1
*NOTE: this is the 1st poem I wrote and posted on HePo. I've managed to finish the first 2 parts and have been struggling with the 3rd; however much of last night was spent refining this initial section so I figured I'd post it in the hopes of receiving some constructive feedback. Thanks. -E.Lavi ************* Dripdripdripdrip drip as it slips all it’s secrets, secrets slipped from the lip of the rusty metal moldy faucet, water whispers water whimpers water wishes of a time long gone; dripping water ever swirling round the beaten bolted sink; bolted to a wooden floor, chipped and nicked and cracked but grips, it grips the sink and won’t let go. Secrets swirling round the sink into the void and through the pipes beneath the wooden boards of floor which would let loose their life-long grip of one worn weathered tired tethered reddish tinted rusty sink if only it - the wood! - if it could leave the floor it; the wood would stand and stretch and scratch and then would walk right out the door; wooden boards held hostage by a layered web of iron nails nailed years ago. Creaking boards tell tales to pipes which snake throughout the secret house; Drip they drip they speak they slip through lips of sinks the secrets silent lip they drip and slip andio they rip and drip andrip they drip they dripdrip they ripipip i i… Hush the whisper of the wind through broken windows rattles timber breaks the slumber of the man whose face is etched and leathered ever marked by hands of time; time played games the game of life the old man thought and thinks he still can stand and stretch and scratch then walk straight through the door and out the house, like secrets lost in rusty pipes he thinks he’ll walk into the dark and be whisked off on wings of wind which carries whispers rattles windows speaks in drips through rusty lips of bolted sinks gripped by the floors forever more and so the man will sit he sits and thinks and thinks he drips and drips drips dripdripipip i i i... End Part 1
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Is "expating" a word? If it isn't well... now it is 'Fore English is a living language Marching forward expanding with the ages I'm from LA but work Has beckoned me half way across the world And thus I'm now an expat Enjoying expating. I haven't searched to Confirm Or Definitevly learn Whether expating exists in the realm of words And to be true I don't quite care at this moment if it is or isn't Why, you ask? Because this is me the expatnactively expating, isn't it?
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Aug 25, 2017
Aug 25, 2017 at 6:12 PM UTC
An Expat Expating
Sun-Bleached Blonde Having Fun In the sand under the sun Sun-kissed skin, taught and tanned Ain't her life so grand? Sun-Bleached Blonde Drinking coke As she smokes, takes a **** Getting high On the beach Careless to the men around Women too Watch her move As she stands In the sand Sun-Bleached Blonde, now she smiles There's a breeze, like the wind knows what it does Makes her happy Makes them happy she is happy Women too, the beach alive Sun-Bleached Blonde Having Fun In the Sun On the sand "Hi," says I. "Hi," says she. Then we stand Our eyes locked "So?" She asks. "What?" Asks I. "That's your pick up line?" "Yupp, that's it." She smiles I melt "I like it she says." "I'm putty," I say. Now she laughs. "You're killing me!" I protest. "Don't die just yet." She leans in, her lips touch mine. First kiss ever I'm 13, she's 19 "Whose this little guy?" Says some dude who just walked up. "He's a heart-breaker," she replies. Why is some dude taking her hand? Why is some dude kissing my love? Am I in love is this it oh my God I'm getting hard I think they see oh **** oh shut in turning red don't know what to... i plop down on the sand, put my head in my hands. Some dude laughs but my blonde frowns, "Go away" she tells her man. Then she sits down takes my hand and she says, "One day you'll find someone right for you." "You're perfect" "I'm not" "I swear you are" She smiles that smile which melts my heart. "One day you'll find there's lots of girls just right for you." "But why not you?" "I'm way too old" "You're not" "I am. For you. You deserve a love your age." "How do you know?" "Because I was your age once too." Some dude calls her, "Let's go babe." "I'm coming," she says, then looks me in the eyes. "Be gentle when the time comes," says she to me. "Gentle?" I ask. She kisses me on the cheek. "Try not breaking too many hearts." Then she stands One last smile Says goodbye Then she's gone. Sun-Bleached Blonde changed my life made me a man who respects the better half of the human race. I wonder where she is right now?
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Aug 25, 2017
Aug 25, 2017 at 9:03 AM UTC
SBBHF
Sun-Bleached Blonde Having Fun In the sand under the sun Sun-kissed skin, taught and tanned Ain't her life so grand? Sun-Bleached Blonde Drinking coke As she smokes, takes a **** Getting high On the beach Careless to the men around Women too Watch her move As she stands In the sand Sun-Bleached Blonde, now she smiles There's a breeze, like the wind knows what it does Makes her happy Makes them happy she is happy Women too, the beach alive Sun-Bleached Blonde Having Fun In the Sun On the sand "Hi," says I. "Hi," says she. Then we stand Our eyes locked "So?" She asks. "What?" Asks I. "That's your pick up line?" "Yupp, that's it." She smiles I melt "I like it she says." "I'm putty," I say. Now she laughs. "You're killing me!" I protest. "Don't die just yet." She leans in, her lips touch mine. First kiss ever I'm 13, she's 19 "Whose this little guy?" Says some dude who just walked up. "He's a heart-breaker," she replies. Why is some dude taking her hand? Why is some dude kissing my love? Am I in love is this it oh my God I'm getting hard I think they see oh **** oh shut in turning red don't know what to... i plop down on the sand, put my head in my hands. Some dude laughs but my blonde frowns, "Go away" she tells her man. Then she sits down takes my hand and she says, "One day you'll find someone right for you." "You're perfect" "I'm not" "I swear you are" She smiles that smile which melts my heart. "One day you'll find there's lots of girls just right for you." "But why not you?" "I'm way too old" "You're not" "I am. For you. You deserve a love your age." "How do you know?" "Because I was your age once too." Some dude calls her, "Let's go babe." "I'm coming," she says, then looks me in the eyes. "Be gentle when the time comes," says she to me. "Gentle?" I ask. She kisses me on the cheek. "Try not breaking too many hearts." Then she stands One last smile Says goodbye Then she's gone. Sun-Bleached Blonde changed my life made me a man who respects the better half of the human race. I wonder where she is right now?
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Thou doth deny my love for you Thou doth deny my words so true My words like chords sing songs of you My world is yours though you decline Denied your love I'm all but blind To all that was and is and could be In a world where your don't see me See me once and hear me speak And then release me from your grip.
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Aug 24, 2017
Aug 24, 2017 at 7:29 PM UTC
Shakespeare I Ain't
Were I to sit upon a throne And gaze, amazed, that I alone Can change your life Can grant your wish Deny your rights 'Fore rights exist As I see fit And thus my whims By my decree Can change your life Should I see fit Oedipus I, I Ordipus am Am ruler of this wretched land Upon my throne I sit alone Alone I sit, alone I am I am alone I Opedipus Rex, I ruler of the dregs
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Aug 24, 2017
Aug 24, 2017 at 12:07 PM UTC
Oedipus I, I
Hues of blue wash the evening sky The moon, alone, In deference to the sun- -Which burns and warms and loves. And gives life. To all within it's fatal grace. A mistress which both loves and hates and bathes one in its warm embrace and kills one lest you lack respect. The Bluelight Special peaks above The Eastern scape And scans the West. In hues of copper, rust and red The Western sky cools as the day And as the sun now fades away In all her glory still she burns And still she clings And still she flicks And spits and licks Her flaming wrath Her's is this world And yet her grace Which graces all Is not enough 'Fore all her strength, nay! despite her grip The world rotates Though she objects Yet nature does what nature does And time ticks on- -the day now gone The Bluelight Special rises clear And soft and bright And rules the night In peace it whispers Can you hear? The Bluelight Special says to you and me and he and she, it whispers and the words you hear are...
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Aug 24, 2017
Aug 24, 2017 at 11:50 AM UTC
Bluelight Special
Drying like a dying leaf Thirsty angry full of grief Ain't no water in this town And if there were I'd spit it out Deny myself No, quenching thirst It ain't for me I don't deserve Not today Not anyway Today I'm dry Wrinkled weathered withered spirit All alone yet too much noise I hear my name Another day At the office With the drones But who am I if I'm not them If them is drones I'm the ******* motherboard Of corporate copy selling **** To ***** across the world It pays the bills Such a sellout So I won't quench my thirst
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Aug 24, 2017
Aug 24, 2017 at 8:51 AM UTC
In The Sun