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Etta James is a beginning poet, who hates the taste of rootbeer but loves the smell. She writes poetry, but she also plays two musical instruments- the piano and clarinet. She sings too, but between us, she should stick with piano and clarinet if she knows what's good for her. / / Etta greatly appreciates all criticism and feedback on her poetry. / / / / Also: Etta does not usually talk in third person.
you toil and tear and hurt people in who-know's-where you seem so surprised when complications arise you create so many problems a tangled mess and who wants to play hero? let me guess
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Oct 8, 2010
Oct 8, 2010 at 6:30 PM UTC
Hypocrite
Trying to reach you foamy waves draw us apart and you aren't here right now but you are still in my heart Can't say the words you want to hear because i've been there before Babe, i'll stand by you even when it starts to pour Yes it will be hard But babe be brave For me, baby, try to not be swallowed up in the wave
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Oct 8, 2010
Oct 8, 2010 at 6:26 PM UTC
For My Brother
it seems so innocent at first the first stitch is slowly- ever so slowly- tearing you tell yourself it’s just a little unstitching It’s fine but then the sensation continues, down your vertebrae, exposing tender flesh you recognize it but you hold back because it’s too embarrassing to speak of thinking it will ruin your friendship but you don’t realize your friendship is already being ruined by the time you can do anything about it It’s gone fabric is torn beyond recognition never to be sewn the exact same way as before and sure, there will be others but the worst part is knowing that that person doesn’t have a ripped seam running down their heart.
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Oct 8, 2010
Oct 8, 2010 at 6:18 PM UTC
Ripped at the Seams
by all means go forth and proclaim to the streets in a high voice what an asset you are to the world show them how to do things your way er, the right way remind us of all the good deeds you have accomplished for we are certainly liable to forget and lastly conclude by giving us list of all the virtues that you posses and i will add that modesty is not one of them
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May 13, 2010
May 13, 2010 at 1:52 PM UTC
poor modest soul
*...he loves me.... ...he loves me not.... ...he loves me.... ...he loves me not...* sitting in a flower patch wondering about you and every fallen petal every turn of daisy is as different as the seasons winter encased everything in white the whiteness blinds emotion it frosts the heart and spring came all too late the sun melted away the ice and left me in a flood of emotions i had carefully frozen i was blind in the brightness of that soft frozen world but spring has come and i can see i ponder in the flower patch *...he loves me.... ...he loves me not....*
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Apr 30, 2010
Apr 30, 2010 at 2:25 PM UTC
in a flower patch
some people will take emotion and shove it into the pockets of their jeans for ‘safe keeping’ to stay until most convenient i am not one of those people if i ever catch a good emotion whizzing by -which i do fairly often- i’ll grab hold of it and let it carry me away to some distant land i’ve never been and probably will never see again so when i caught you in the air it was thrilling just imagine all the places you took me in only a few moments and even if it didn’t last long i will always remember the journey, and adventure, excitement, you gave me and there isn't a big enough pocket in the world that can contain that
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Apr 16, 2010
Apr 16, 2010 at 4:41 PM UTC
jean pocket
Love is self-inflicted pain those with broken hearts must be insane Gambling every delicate possession Dignity, Pride, a fragile Heart tied in one love confession It’s a gamble I’m not willing to take No, not when My heart’s at stake No, not me I won’t get my hopes flushed Because love is suicide and I don’t want my heart crushed
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Feb 15, 2010
Feb 15, 2010 at 3:53 PM UTC
Suicide
I felt the fury rippling inside Trying to contain it was like holding back the tide To unleash the wrath, the fury, the power, to see my enemies beg on their knees and cower I wanted it more than anything No, right now I wanted it more than everything I was tired of bottling it up Tired of acting and playing the grown-up I was through with being “mature” Being myself I would much rather prefer Than putting on a show And trying to be someone I don’t know If I added just one more thing to my load I was sure I was going to explode Nothing could stop me- I was going to blow And I didn’t care what the destruction would look like tomorrow
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Feb 15, 2010
Feb 15, 2010 at 3:52 PM UTC
Temper Tantrum
See the boys flock around her the winning smile, the sunlit hair Shouldn't I be envious Treated like a goddess true beauty from above Aren't I envious Dreamy face perfect body I should be envious And I'm not For I'd rather live my entire life as a distant illuminating flicker than to glow like a thousand stars for a moment and burn out the wick
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Feb 15, 2010
Feb 15, 2010 at 3:52 PM UTC
Illumination
It’s like peeling back the curtains It’s like dusting off an old trophy It’s like opening a sealed trunk You’re pulling at the very fabric of my existence And I like being discovered Especially by you And then I wonder if it is meant to be If you’ll like me when that’s all there is The curtains drawn No mystery No suspense Just Plain Unchanging Old All my secrets told Nothing else to see Plain Old Me And I can’t allow that So I shut up Like slamming close a book Like a rubber band snapping in place To back before When you didn’t know me When you didn’t care to know me When I couldn’t get hurt Safe in dull ignorance A door- less enclosed space And windows to taunt Force me to see what could have been Trapped in my own security Willingly enchained And yet longing for what I gave up Trapped in an internal circle of misery Is that what love is? A choice between two awful extremes Forced to pick my poison And somehow through all the heartbreaks and heartaches I choose love every time
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Feb 15, 2010
Feb 15, 2010 at 3:51 PM UTC
The Dilemma