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dw-1234
Massachusetts First time sharing, just looking for feedback to help me get better at writing poetry/songs.
Love someone’s problems Patch all their holes People love the remedy That makes them feel whole Some call it selfish love It only benefits you This is loving yourself And giving back to who? You view others as something to gain But there’s a flip side to this Your partners the same By loving another’s problems We begin to see That the love i am giving Reflects back at me
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Jun 5, 2018
Jun 5, 2018 at 9:18 PM UTC
Something Funny About Love
Safely behind a wall of glass I can see the life outside Existing beyond, but told the grass is not always greener Wood walls, remain safe Desks, continue to produce Results, the resources gained Coffin, the inevitable result To take the door, or continue preparing? For what do I risk from remaining? Gain to never use Use to never gain Living without smiling Surrender to postponement The itch to run, the fear to arrive Opportunity versus Opportunity Cost What are the profits of opposite? Green bills or memories? Do they exist only apart? Execute for profit, execute for joy Creating equilibrium A life long journey of seeking To grin often in the faces of those who have most
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Jun 5, 2018
Jun 5, 2018 at 10:53 AM UTC
Profit or Expense
Beauty, all of its forms Holds in her hands Nurturing insignificance Holds our every breath Live by order Die by design Thoughts are control Feeling, the result We give to receive We see to be seen We die to live We live to die Old as time Desire innate Behind perspective It’s all here Breaking the ties These laws that adhere Unequalized and raw Of unpolarized origin Can’t perceive what we aren’t Once we do Hello Beauty
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May 31, 2018
May 31, 2018 at 9:48 AM UTC
Origin