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danahslade99
danahslade99
17/F I write dark poetry
You swept me out to sea, I followed you willingly. Then you threw my heart onto the rocks So the fragments washed away from my grasp. I couldn’t find myself again, Piece my heart back; mend. Yes, I saw the light, no, I did not take caution But it was your dry shores that kept me Strewn for so long, they watched As my ship corroded in wait Of help from your imaginary inhabitant. You are the deceiving lighthouse I should have stayed away from your edge. But your beam pulled me in A warning sign in the disguise of a friend.
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May 12, 2019
May 12, 2019 at 8:45 PM UTC
Deceiving Lighthouse
I feel like one of those girls At a drive-through "Hey, can I take your order?" Then you leave in a few. I don’t know how you changed from Someone who cared to someone who can’t. They say those things don't happen overnight Yet here I am, proving fast food Is less dispensable than my heart.
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May 12, 2019
May 12, 2019 at 1:34 PM UTC
Drive-through
. . Mind my French but… 'Tu me manques' . . . (I miss you)
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May 12, 2019
May 12, 2019 at 1:13 PM UTC
Mind my f*cking French
What's it take These days To write a poem That makes the world go mad That brings the crowds to their feet That spreads like wildfire Through a dry winter forest Is it those excessively long words? The ostentatiously loquacious Platitudinous ramblings Of an insecure mind aspiring To authentic intellect? Is it perhaps...      the "creativity"                of      varied      spacing   or...    could it be..... the lack                               of capitalization                the loathsome little letters                screaming out                          hey, look at us!          ... or maybe it's                the punctuation marks,      littered, haphazardly           through the text                     (whether used correctly)                or, theyre not?!      despite worrds mispeled           and a grammar might is broken    can these gimmicks increase interest         though miswritten or misspoken? Is the trick alliteration Whose bite brightly bids us To center on the snappy sounds? Although all along      unvoiced underneath Ideas idle in the isles    (or perhaps the aisles) Of the mind To meld and craft and bind Our thorough thoughts And worthy words Into lines Which Heard by herds Raise the                   Praise for which we                   Privately, desperately                   Pray Maybe it's a magical mix Of splendid in-your-head rhythm Marvelous meter that perfectly clicks Flowing smoothly without schism Well-spaced stanzas Well-used time Well-crafted phrases Well-thought-out rhymes Well, maybe not...      those gems are often ignored      cast-aside, unread, even abhorred Why? Because the modern world doesn't need your rules your restrictions your regulations your misguided boundaries your oppression your antiquated ideas    of "the right way"    to write    to speak    to act    to live    to (fill in the blank) No, what the modern world needs is Negation! Contradiction! Resistance! Revolt! And poetry whose words Say the same thing Repeat the same meaning Echo the same lyrics Rephrase the same thoughts But in an ever-so-slightly Different Varied Altered Adjusted Changed up way Line After line Of synonyms           over                and                     over                          and                          over                          again ----- What's it take These days To not give in To narcissism's spiral? But more importantly: What's it take To make my poem go viral?
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Mar 3, 2019
Mar 3, 2019 at 7:37 AM UTC
Viral
What's it take These days To write a poem That makes the world go mad That brings the crowds to their feet That spreads like wildfire Through a dry winter forest Is it those excessively long words? The ostentatiously loquacious Platitudinous ramblings Of an insecure mind aspiring To authentic intellect? Is it perhaps...      the "creativity"                of      varied      spacing   or...    could it be..... the lack                               of capitalization                the loathsome little letters                screaming out                          hey, look at us!          ... or maybe it's                the punctuation marks,      littered, haphazardly           through the text                     (whether used correctly)                or, theyre not?!      despite worrds mispeled           and a grammar might is broken    can these gimmicks increase interest         though miswritten or misspoken? Is the trick alliteration Whose bite brightly bids us To center on the snappy sounds? Although all along      unvoiced underneath Ideas idle in the isles    (or perhaps the aisles) Of the mind To meld and craft and bind Our thorough thoughts And worthy words Into lines Which Heard by herds Raise the                   Praise for which we                   Privately, desperately                   Pray Maybe it's a magical mix Of splendid in-your-head rhythm Marvelous meter that perfectly clicks Flowing smoothly without schism Well-spaced stanzas Well-used time Well-crafted phrases Well-thought-out rhymes Well, maybe not...      those gems are often ignored      cast-aside, unread, even abhorred Why? Because the modern world doesn't need your rules your restrictions your regulations your misguided boundaries your oppression your antiquated ideas    of "the right way"    to write    to speak    to act    to live    to (fill in the blank) No, what the modern world needs is Negation! Contradiction! Resistance! Revolt! And poetry whose words Say the same thing Repeat the same meaning Echo the same lyrics Rephrase the same thoughts But in an ever-so-slightly Different Varied Altered Adjusted Changed up way Line After line Of synonyms           over                and                     over                          and                          over                          again ----- What's it take These days To not give in To narcissism's spiral? But more importantly: What's it take To make my poem go viral?
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We press our bodies together Forcing separate atoms to form one Of a new breed, But it will never be achieved We don’t bond Just periodically breathe.
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Aug 12, 2018
Aug 12, 2018 at 10:46 PM UTC
Chemistry
Melancholy; Melt in lands Unholy In an abyss of Harm supressed; Between two palms pressed Together. Remind us we are Desolate; Descending to a Solitary fate Where days Gloomy; Glue me To my memories Cold cruelty and Shame; An attempt at shadowing The untamed.
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Aug 12, 2018
Aug 12, 2018 at 9:14 PM UTC
Melancholy