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courtney-schofield
“Just pour some water on his head,” I said to the waitress. “I can’t do that. What if he wakes up and freaks out all covered in water?” “Well, I don’t think he will.” He hadn’t moved Since we’d been there. He was old, old. Old people might go to Denny’s drunk and fall asleep, but old, old people? They almost never do that. “I don’t know,” I said. “He might be dead. What do you think, Is the man dead?” “I think so,” she said The ambulance came, and they took him away. He was wearing this shirt, and it had a dead duck in a dog’s mouth. My dad dresses like that, too, in Spalding tennis shoes, and jean shorts. Was he someone’s dad? How will they find out that their dead dead dad came to Denny’s to die? Or will they just call around looking for their dad when they get worried about why he won’t answer the phone? How far will they have to drive, all teary-eyed (or not) to see their dead dad’s old, old dead body? Will they ever go to a Denny’s again? I think that they will. Everyone goes to a Denny’s again, except for him.
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Oct 31, 2015
Oct 31, 2015 at 10:08 AM UTC
dead dead old old
What kind of life does the man have that licks yogurt from his hands in the dairy aisle while I squeeze packages of cheese and you shake a cantaloupe like a magic 8 ball. It smells sweet but the problem you’re having is that you can’t hear the seeds. What kind of life do we have? Ask again later. What kind of life do we have? Outlook not so good. And the man? Concentrate. Ask again later.
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Jun 22, 2015
Jun 22, 2015 at 8:24 PM UTC
Some Kind of Life
When it is raining I don’t need an umbrella because those aren’t raindrops, but water. And I go inside smelling like wet garbage and cigarettes evaporating directly into the nostrils of the people who I'm afraid won't like me. They bought their umbrellas on sunny days because they are smarter than I am because they knew that the sky falls from time to time but I didn't know anything about that.
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Dec 3, 2014
Dec 3, 2014 at 8:44 PM UTC
I'm Most Optimistic when it's the Least Productive