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brogan-dinsdale
English I've been writing poetry for around 4 years, and have built up a collection of around 100 poems, my aim in the future is to get them published, and to just hear peoples thoughts, reactions and perspectives on them. I'll be adding a few on here for people to see, my style is very varied as I like to explore different ways of expression, but let me know what you think of my poems, good or bad, all feedback is constructive.
As each petal opens Upon her face Anxiety pulses through Revealing a tale Of long lost Memories Dreams And fears Secretes entwined Set free Another petal opens Raindrops fall Just like the tears Washing away Each of her fears Slowly split open Grown from a seed Risen up through the Darkness Phenomenal Beauty appears
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Jul 12, 2010
Jul 12, 2010 at 2:16 PM UTC
The Flower
My Great wall of china Towering 25 feet high To stop the rain from Pouring To stop the snow From falling From the Deceitful sky Each brick A memory A faithless Lie Nobody can Pass through… My Great wall Of China Will stand till I die.
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Jul 7, 2010
Jul 7, 2010 at 1:10 PM UTC
Great Wall of China
I do not scratch my anger into My skin I pour it onto My paper anger can’t win. I do not slice sadness into My arm the sadness will cause no more harm. I won’t show My pain the bottom of the glass I am wise I know the pain will pass. I won’t let rage make Me pop a pill but put pen to paper that I will.
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Jun 14, 2010
Jun 14, 2010 at 8:52 AM UTC
Pain Vs. Paper
Like the stars of the night must fade away And so sure it is, the sun will be gone at the end of the day In your arms, this soul can no longer stay Eyes seeking mine, like light in the dark As the hands of time pull our fingers apart... Your skin cries out for my touch, Longingly I see you waiting in love... To be touched, by nothing but the bittersweet air, only, Only, if our sun and moon, danced side by side In night and day and day and night The eclipse of love, rare but true A heart beat too many, from me and you Each soul can await a thousand lives To feel, to see, to grasp, if only for a second This indescribable Eclipse of love, As I stand upon the ground, knowing Our hearts a world apart Releasing your touch, The eclipse of love Is too impossibly, far from us.
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Jun 14, 2010
Jun 14, 2010 at 4:17 AM UTC
Eclipse Of Love