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avery-sharp
This account is for a class I'm taking. It's intended to get feedback on my work from the public so comments are appreciated! Thank you!
Sunlight playing on my tapping foot Wishing this bus could ride forever The images seen through glass, flash and pass Manifest into destination And my stomach lurches Butterflies for the past and future
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Dec 9, 2012
Dec 9, 2012 at 1:42 PM UTC
Barnum Effect
I see things No one else looks I know the meanings Pay attention to the small things Little talks can read like books I see things Conversations defined by greetings Feelings slip from hooks I know the meanings You can cave in all your ceilings Body Language you mistook I see things High and low fill your feelings From having no outlook I know the meanings Interactions are only dealings Thieves, liars, and crooks I see things I know the meanings
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Dec 9, 2012
Dec 9, 2012 at 1:30 PM UTC
I see things