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amanda-pedersen
Canadian Perpetually seeking light, in all its glory. The blinding glare of fluorescents, or the soft candescence of the sun filtering through the branches. / / I greatly appreciate constructive critiscm! Please and thank you :)
Your silences Thicken the air And stills my hand; All eyes on the                Space You occupy. You are like the Nothing, Infinite in your absence. I feel your breath Taste your mind In the stillness, Void Of everything Except this Will-o-wisp I once called my vessel. I keep dreaming of white curtains, Eggs frying In the vast skillet Of your eyes. I'm losing sight Waiting for you To come up the alley. I wake to echoes Crunching gravel And a warm body Taking your place Beside the cat Until you arrive.
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Dec 5, 2011
Dec 5, 2011 at 5:50 AM UTC
White Curtains
I am a liar or A storyteller, Which I prefer. You can’t find me In my photo albums; A different girl Every year. I paint many masks And spin many tales Just so I can Finally Hear anything I can call my own. Here is my heart In essence, Which isn’t necessarily In truth, Though I try To fit the image. So many Separate Profiles; All less than a Fraction Of a whole. But who’s to judge Reality, Or truth? Call it equation; Boil it down to Numbers, but Everything Has variables. So I’m a liar - So is the sun, Shining cold and Distant In winter; So are you, Pretending. Calculate the image Lest you leave A jumble of Meaningless Numbers, just so Many digits and Too few faces.
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Dec 3, 2011
Dec 3, 2011 at 7:54 AM UTC
Raconteur Variable
With hair like A montage of scorched Leaves, twisted With twigs in. Like the biting chill or Rustle of great beasts; Like so many but None at all, You make your Abrupt Entrance, and Take down the walls with Rain. What resides in your Torrential mind, Flickering with light? A lighthouse or Flame, yet maybe A spark, but Really nothing but The beacon of your Consciousness, Burning your image Into the back of my eyes, Blinding. I can’t see past Your eyes, Shuttered and shifting like Sand, or my restless Feet, Filled with ephemeral light. Caught in a riptide, Isolation tank, or Whatever bland metaphor You’d accept for my Blank stare.
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Dec 3, 2011
Dec 3, 2011 at 7:41 AM UTC
Actively Vacant