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aine-smith
Irish New to this, looking for feedback/advice
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I like you, you feel the same Right? Ok. So we date. You move on and expect Me to learn from my mistakes. I’m not willing to satisfy You treat me roughly Tell me I’m too young. I cry, move on and Learn from my mistakes. Still not experienced I’m not detached enough A disappointed utter You move on and expect Me to learn from my mistakes. My friends ex, A permanent heart throb. Old feelings surface I cry, move on and Learn from my mistakes. You meet my **** housemate A tall, lean ***** You wake in her bed You move on and expect Me to learn from my mistakes. A long standing flame I never demand full attention You fall for a pretty doctor I cry, move on and Learn from my mistakes. *How many more times How many faults to correct Again Right?* I like you, you feel the same Right? Ok. So we date. You move on and expect Me to learn from my mistakes.
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Oct 14, 2011
Oct 14, 2011 at 5:33 AM UTC
aine-smith
Again, Right?
I like you, you feel the same Right? Ok. So we date. You move on and expect Me to learn from my mistakes. I’m not willing to satisfy You treat me roughly Tell me I’m too young. I cry, move on and Learn from my mistakes. Still not experienced I’m not detached enough A disappointed utter You move on and expect Me to learn from my mistakes. My friends ex, A permanent heart throb. Old feelings surface I cry, move on and Learn from my mistakes. You meet my **** housemate A tall, lean ***** You wake in her bed You move on and expect Me to learn from my mistakes. A long standing flame I never demand full attention You fall for a pretty doctor I cry, move on and Learn from my mistakes. *How many more times How many faults to correct Again Right?* I like you, you feel the same Right? Ok. So we date. You move on and expect Me to learn from my mistakes.
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