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aaron-gutierrez
Mexican We all have that one song that sums up our day,personality or even our life. Well poems are songs themselves and I do my best to portray the truth. Truth meaning my definition of it and my experience with it. You wont find much structure in my poems and sometimes you wont enjoy them either but its your right to say "hey this guys sh**" and walk away. Thanks for reading! / / / Criticism is welcome / / Feb.16.2013: I've been getting some good "reactions" to my two poems so I will make it a priority to post more. Thank you!
I blame the weather I blame a ***** sweater Whatever I can to stay inside For those around I cannot confide I've always kept to myself For my ways are judged Judged by sinners themselves Who value objects above life itself I do not follow foolish trends Nor do I twitter an instagram of my facebook post For I have very little friends But my pack is ever so close We come from the same hood ****** capitol Chicago Land of crooks and killers Where only real winners make real figures Where crooked politicians and crooked cops Make more money from thugs selling rocks Than they do from working Chicago blocks Have you ever heard of a more twisted paradox? You tell me why they need the newest trucks With the finest leather for the felon feller A golden cell is still a cage Where a killer lives for days as your relative lays forever
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Jan 6, 2014
Jan 6, 2014 at 3:45 PM UTC
Golden cell
You left the streets for your family But you forgot your own in the ghetto Moms broken down ever since Always looking kinda mellow She cries for her soldier's return But he'll never leave his brothers For their presence he'll always yearn Even if it means leaving two mothers One his own, the other his children's But his future was written Ever as a young'n he
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Jun 4, 2013
Jun 4, 2013 at 3:48 AM UTC
Brother Soldier(not done)
went to the hospital last week saw my baby on the ultrasound came home and i had'a write it down My babies inbound and this rap thing hasn't left the ground I try to move but my feet dont follow must think if i go ill crash like the Apollo so i tell myself maybe it'll go better tomorrow Friends telling me Congrats when I'm still getting Richards education
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Jan 25, 2013
Jan 25, 2013 at 7:05 PM UTC
Untitled(unfinished of course)
We live a bugs life Roaches, Dime A dozen Roley Polys, Belly up scared frozen Ants, At the hill top Fighting from their desktop Taxing every cot Hundreds from the working bee Foreclosing hives off every tree Wives on their knees begging please Left homeless in stress Only their babies to caress *We live a bugs life Ready to be seized*
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Jan 18, 2012
Jan 18, 2012 at 9:35 PM UTC
A Bugs Life