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The_Definition_Of_Amateur
The_Definition_Of_Amateur
19/F amateur poet in need of some constructive criticism
Sweat clings from her nose, makes beads on her lashes, collects in her collar bone like hot summer rain. She melts in the sun-steeped air, drips onto the dusty ground. As soft and as sweet as the warm berries she plucks from the bush and tips to her mouth. A blueberry baby needs no thorns to guard her. She welcomes all those with patience who wait for those hot summer months that rid her of tartness, fill out her sun-sweetened face, so that each lovely expression is pulled from her willingly. An overwhelming harvest to outlast cold months.
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Nov 12, 2020
Nov 12, 2020 at 1:42 PM UTC
Bluberry Baby
A sweet little kitten I found her, and so I thought she would stay, but the mischief inside her started to stir almost the very next day. Where went that sweet little kitten who’d sleep in my lap so sound? Now I'm more apt to be bitten! Then away from me she will bound. Alas, I adore this sweet kitten, twice now the size she once was. Forever I'll find myself smitten with her pink nose and velvety paws.
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Jun 23, 2020
Jun 23, 2020 at 2:21 PM UTC
Sweet Little Kitten
Pollen like powdered sunshine coats her old whiskered cheeks, Nature’s rouge applied generously by the wind's careful brush. Under the boughs of a pine, inch worms dance like court jesters on tightropes of silk for her amusement, as a disgruntled bee who’s clover patch she’s made her throne is dismissed with the flick of a gilded ear.
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Jun 22, 2020
Jun 22, 2020 at 9:18 PM UTC
An Old Cat's Garden
Joy fills the heart of all that overhear A cardinal’s frothy trill to a love not yet known. His proud red plumage made to commandeer, Demanding attention from a willow branch throne. Tell me how one cannot beam with delight When they first catch glimpse of a mockingbird’s tail. It fans out behind them like the ribbons of a kite as they burst into song with the force of a gale. An immense chorus hidden within every tree drenched in the dazzling feathers of spring. Regal chests puffed, they rally a plea, Pledging their love in each verse they sing. Wings that unfurl like a flower in bloom, Their voices make even the coldest heart swoon
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Jun 22, 2020
Jun 22, 2020 at 9:17 PM UTC
Springtime Sonnet
You handed me your memories from the passenger seat. Together on long drives home, we pondered the hushed musings of youth that patter through heads and echo loudly in the emptiness of half-formed identities. Often the drive would be over, but the journey would continue, the sound of the idling engine harmonizing with the raucous beat of our young hearts. Parked besides rows of sleeping houses and wrapped in the security of a cloudless night, my car's upholstery was saturated with tears of laughter and grief. Rambling conversations, important only because they felt so, shared in the privacy of a moving state, a state neither here nor there, but in between. We’d sit swimming in a broth of words until life would tug open the car door, spilling our fragile thoughts out onto cold cement, and the chill of reality would seep into our bones, and make us pull our ill-fitting egos closer to us, their fragile unraveling threads the only means to stave off the inconsolable state that marks the end of childhood.
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Jun 22, 2020
Jun 22, 2020 at 9:17 PM UTC
Ode to a Friendship
At night the beach is devoured by the ocean's greedy mouth. The shoreline relentlessly scoured by her many tongues that lap at feet, tugging the ground beneath those who walk her borders, who greet their mortality with open arms. At night the ocean eats the sky, swallows the horizon whole to fill her stomach with stars that shine on each lonely soul who walk her borders, hunting for beauty.
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Jun 22, 2020
Jun 22, 2020 at 9:15 PM UTC
The Ocean's Appetite
Orange fur now creamy beige bleached by hours spent sunbathing. Dark stripes now faint shadows on your scarred face. In your old age you’ve started to drool when I rub your sweet head, and tattered ears. - I stroke your fur, and find my hands dusty. You wear your years like a suit made of earth. Now I find myself looking for the thin veil of dirt on a chair, that tells me you’ve just enjoyed a good nap. - Our home is your personal menagerie. Despite our best efforts, you add to your collection. Birds, mice, lizards, opossums. Like the man in Australia who so wished to hunt rabbits, he released some in his backyard. The opposite of a very good mouser. - As I write this, you’re asleep in my arms, your nose, with one torn nostril, leaving a wet spot on my sweater, and as I write, I pray I never have to look at the hole you’ve dug in our garden, and not see you sleeping in it.
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Jun 22, 2020
Jun 22, 2020 at 9:14 PM UTC
Ode to an Old Tomcat
My thoughts whip up like egg white into a frothy foam. Unbridled by my sleeping mind away from me they roam. They gallop ‘cross my vision, and frolic ‘round my head. A restful night I will not have until I’m good and dead.
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Jun 22, 2020
Jun 22, 2020 at 9:12 PM UTC
Dreams Romp Like Stallions
In bottle green water the sky glances demurely at her reflection, the great expanse of her complexion freckled with her feathered children cooing their boundless admiration, as she beckons them further into her loving embrace. The earth reaches out tall pines, straining to touch the sky’s sweet face, and the sky kisses each bough, Blessing each roost, that when she rest, the earth might welcome her children with tenderness To sleep cradled in her many arms.
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Jun 22, 2020
Jun 22, 2020 at 9:11 PM UTC
Surrogate
Smeared across a highway, organs glitter like rubies ripped from a young bride's riviere. a mourner dressed in the black plumage of grief Keeps vigil in silence. With his beak, he carves out last rights into flesh. The pallbearer of countless souls snuffed out on an asphalt ashtray. Wrinkled head bent low, he walks with the shuffle of a tired custodian, as others rush past offering weak condolences with the throaty warning of a horn, at some somber procession that dare interfere with more important lives. Around him, Cars spew profanity from bubbling engines, as they hurtle irreverently through a slaughterhouse Crafted from indifference. The serrated edges of busy lives cutting through meat and bone.
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Jun 22, 2020
Jun 22, 2020 at 9:11 PM UTC
The Last Rights of Roadkill