Suhailabawar1
21/F/Afghanistan
I write dark poems ! / Shared some on Wattpad too / I would very much appreciate it if you give your honest feedbacks on my poems , it just takes a minute to do that. And that could help me develop my poetry very much. / Thank you so much in advance! / -
My own thoughts
Filling me, I founder
Pushing me backwards
They Hit me like a thunder
My own thoughts
Laid down on a pile
And I went their under
Griped me from my collar
Dragged me, I surrender
My own thoughts
Are getting ample thicker
Lightening up my darkness
Shining muddy flicker
My own thoughts
Planned my tiny murther
Heaved the ground bellow my feet
And i can fall no further
Jul 6, 2019
Jul 6, 2019 at 8:39 AM UTC
Carless death,
laying on my bed.
Sitting in the corner of my room,
my knees below my head.
The blackness gleams
And I'm trying to get up on my feet.
And the sorrow beams
in every mournful tear my eyes greet.
Entirely lit up with pain,
And Its living in my vein
I fail to have the life
I used to frown on it,
when I look at that wall.
Crashed up and Messed up
figures drawn on it,
reminds me I will fall.
A devil hanging down my fan,
is the only thing I've got to see.
And it Seems like yea it feels like,
with it I've got intimacy.
Constantly invites me,
to have a drink along.
Maybe this utter darkness,
is the place where i belong.
Reaching the doors,
old knobs.
world could hear
my cold sobs
Let here all the lilies bloom
When you plant me deep down in grave.
I never made it out this room
You knew, Mind-ly Peace was all i craved.
Time to throw my funeral,
delighting party to my soul
I lost me, from my own self,
on it I couldn't earn control
Jul 6, 2019
Jul 6, 2019 at 8:27 AM UTC