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RhodriWelsh
14/F/Australia I would love it if you would critique my poems
The rise and fall of the tide The major suffering nationwide The pulsing beats of the human heart The corrupt nations that fall apart The movement of the tectonic plates The power of evil continuously dictates The constant blinking of the human eye The vast darkness that fills the sky The thoughts that linger at the back of a mind The troubled souls searching for one that is kind The sounds waves that vibrate off one's eardrums The children of our future abandoned in the slums The shackles of society that weigh us down The merciful heavens that give us a frown
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Jul 12, 2020
Jul 12, 2020 at 4:09 AM UTC
The-
Drowning, In a tsunami of thoughts. Cast adrift, In a sea of perpetual wonder. Abandoned, In a whirlpool of stress. Deserted, In a state of worry Forsaken, By all
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Jan 17, 2020
Jan 17, 2020 at 1:16 AM UTC
Forsaken
Tis hither that we part An escapade of misadventures To bethink not wherefore We hath chosen to part But to what we owe this encounter Alas the world may sayeth Stranger art we not So t aches me to sayeth Tis hither that we part Mine stranger
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May 3, 2019
May 3, 2019 at 11:26 AM UTC
Stranger