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K_A
15/F Just a writer in the making trying to work things out. / English is not my first language so I'm open for any corrections and/or suggestions. I still have a lot to learn lol. / Let's all be friends!
I asked for petals. They gave me thorns. I didn’t complain. Didn’t protest. Just pressed them into my palms and let the pain sit there because what else can I do but accept I asked for a home. And got walls that didn’t care if I stayed. Rooms that swallowed my voice whole. A mother whose hands used to tuck me in now they just tremble, now they just throw things, now they just forgot how to hold me. I asked for a father. He left his shadow behind, but not himself. I still set the table for him. Still listen for the sound of his footsteps. Still wonder if he knows I am disappearing into the spaces he abandoned. I asked for love, but no one looked at me long enough to see the cracks forming beneath my skin. No one noticed when I stopped crying, when I stopped asking for anything at all. I asked for petals. They gave me thorns. And when they saw me wearing them like a crown, they finally realized I had stopped feeling the pain a long time ago. (Not that they cared at all)
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May 10, 2025
May 10, 2025 at 2:32 PM UTC
I Asked for Petals, They Gave Me Thorns