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Hermione10
Hermione10
I don't write the best poems, but sometimes I occasionally find a pearl. / I appreciate if people gave feedback. / Thx everyone. / / I'm a Sherlock fan!
"DEAR BLANK CHALLENGE" PLEASE PLEASE READ THIS AND REPOST TRY TO KEEP IT GOING: HELLOPOETRY "DEAR BLANK" CHALLENGE SECRET SANTA POEMS EXCEPT NOT SECRET AND NOT SANTA RANDOM ACT/POEM OF KINDNESS STRANGER POETRY APPRECIATION I thought it might be nice to do like a secret santa thingy on hellopoetry only not secret and not santa… what I mean is, find a random stranger you literally have never met and do NOT know at all whose poetry you like and spend actual time genuinely reading their work, picking out your favorite lines and responding to them, pondering them, etc. Write something positive to them and post it as a poem with their name in the title. The “DEAR BLANK” challenge only you put their name instead of “blank”. I think we could all use a little recognition that we exist and are worth something since everyone seems a little depressed on here (including myself) which is fine, it’s a great outlet but it would be nice for people to just spontaneously find that a random stranger spent time in their life just to recognize you and care about your poetry. To write a kind poem/letter to them responding to lines in their poetry. If you need an example I just posted DEAR IMALRIGHT which was exactly what I meant. Check out imalright's poetry btw it is amazing. I plan on doing for more than one person and I'd love for you to do the same. Spread a little kindness, we could all use a little. Also message me if you are going to do the challenge and message the stranger you do the DEAR BLANK challenge for so they know to look for and read your poem. I just thought that Imalright who was a perfect stranger to me seemed like a wonderful poet and a wonderful person based on her poetry so I chose her. You do that too if you accept the DEAR BLANK challenge. INCLUDE DEARBLANKCHALLENGE AS A HASHTAG IF YOU DO THE CHALLENGE SO EVERYONE CAN FIND THEM please repost this over and over so we can get as many people involved as possible and try and make a difference in a couple people's lives because I just want to make everyone feel loved but I'm just one girl, I can't do it alone. Please help me with this and join me in the DEAR BLANK challenge. Take time out of your day to properly appreciate someone's poetry who you do not know. PLEASE REPOST LET'S GET EVERYONE INVOLVED!!! ;D THANKS! -EMBER EVANESCENT
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Nov 13, 2014
Nov 13, 2014 at 2:11 PM UTC
"DEAR BLANK CHALLENGE" PLEASE PLEASE READ THIS AND REPOST TRY TO KEEP IT GOING: HELLOPOETRY "DEAR BLANK" CHALLENGE SECRET SANTA POEMS EXCEPT NOT SECRET AND NOT SANTA RANDOM ACT/POEM OF KINDNESS STRANGER POETRY APPRECIATION
"DEAR BLANK CHALLENGE" PLEASE PLEASE READ THIS AND REPOST TRY TO KEEP IT GOING: HELLOPOETRY "DEAR BLANK" CHALLENGE SECRET SANTA POEMS EXCEPT NOT SECRET AND NOT SANTA RANDOM ACT/POEM OF KINDNESS STRANGER POETRY APPRECIATION I thought it might be nice to do like a secret santa thingy on hellopoetry only not secret and not santa… what I mean is, find a random stranger you literally have never met and do NOT know at all whose poetry you like and spend actual time genuinely reading their work, picking out your favorite lines and responding to them, pondering them, etc. Write something positive to them and post it as a poem with their name in the title. The “DEAR BLANK” challenge only you put their name instead of “blank”. I think we could all use a little recognition that we exist and are worth something since everyone seems a little depressed on here (including myself) which is fine, it’s a great outlet but it would be nice for people to just spontaneously find that a random stranger spent time in their life just to recognize you and care about your poetry. To write a kind poem/letter to them responding to lines in their poetry. If you need an example I just posted DEAR IMALRIGHT which was exactly what I meant. Check out imalright's poetry btw it is amazing. I plan on doing for more than one person and I'd love for you to do the same. Spread a little kindness, we could all use a little. Also message me if you are going to do the challenge and message the stranger you do the DEAR BLANK challenge for so they know to look for and read your poem. I just thought that Imalright who was a perfect stranger to me seemed like a wonderful poet and a wonderful person based on her poetry so I chose her. You do that too if you accept the DEAR BLANK challenge. INCLUDE DEARBLANKCHALLENGE AS A HASHTAG IF YOU DO THE CHALLENGE SO EVERYONE CAN FIND THEM please repost this over and over so we can get as many people involved as possible and try and make a difference in a couple people's lives because I just want to make everyone feel loved but I'm just one girl, I can't do it alone. Please help me with this and join me in the DEAR BLANK challenge. Take time out of your day to properly appreciate someone's poetry who you do not know. PLEASE REPOST LET'S GET EVERYONE INVOLVED!!! ;D THANKS! -EMBER EVANESCENT
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*Don't allow yourself to feel "dumb" or "stupid" based on your inability to achieve something you care little about. -Joseph B Schneider*
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Nov 5, 2014
Nov 5, 2014 at 12:41 PM UTC
Quote #4
Why did you change? You were great the way you were I loved your bubbly laugh And the way you Flipped your hair Why did you change? We used to joke and laugh together And you comforted me when I was depressed and gloomy But now you're as cold was the wind on a wintry day Never looking back or thinking about me Why did you change?
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Oct 30, 2014
Oct 30, 2014 at 10:51 AM UTC
Changing
I smiled When you smiled Walked When you walked Talked When you talked I followed in your footsteps When you were gone Now that the traces Of your footfalls Have washed away What should I do?
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Oct 30, 2014
Oct 30, 2014 at 10:50 AM UTC
Role Model
If I wore prettier clothes Would you like me? If I wore makeup And wore fancy clothes Would you accept me? Would you only have me if I was pretty? Did what was inside matter? Did you have to change me? So I could be perfect?
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Oct 30, 2014
Oct 30, 2014 at 10:49 AM UTC
Perfect
Falling down, getting a F instead of an A A drop in your average, the difference between average and excellent Intelligence, that you didn't have Loathing that you feel at yourself for making mistakes U feel as if the pressure of trying it do good is weighing you down Remorse, that you couldn't be as good as your friends Excellence, what you strive to have next time
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Oct 29, 2014
Oct 29, 2014 at 9:38 AM UTC
Failure
The slam of the door The scream The blood on the walls Something was taken Stolen Gone
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Oct 29, 2014
Oct 29, 2014 at 7:47 AM UTC
Stolen
I was there with you that day You went to the doctor with the pain I thought it would be ok But we both cried When the doctor Said That you had cancer I was with you every step of the way You had the treatment But still day by day You got weaker And weaker Until you couldn't eat anymore They said you were going to die But I didn't believe it Till the very last day When you lay there in bed Knowing what was going to happen You hugged me one last time And said I love you I turned away from the bed I cried for days on end Never stopping I still cry today But it's hidden Just like you In my heart
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Oct 27, 2014
Oct 27, 2014 at 2:54 PM UTC
You
A dark cloud hovering Right above your head Never lifting It rains And pours tears Of sorrow on your head I want to leave To be with you But I know you want Me to stay And wait till its time
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Oct 27, 2014
Oct 27, 2014 at 1:24 PM UTC
Death of a Loved One