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Ash_slade
Ash_slade
27/Non-binary 27 year old poet with a lot to say. Searching for genuine critique and advice. Writing since 12 years old.
the thunderclaps in the night purple dust clouds the light. dogs on fences howl at moon shadows on the floors of rooms. crickets in the burnt grass call cold rain falls on houses tall. purple dust clouds the light strong winds, a cold backbite. the cats in an alley eat a fish golden moon dangles like a dish. whistlers banging windowpanes brown rainwater in storm drains. shadows on the floors of rooms whispered voices softly croon. a child falls into a deep sleep after counting leaping sheep. a music box plays it's chords creaking in the old floorboards. cold rain falls on houses tall above, a golden nugget meatball. crows in the field circle around beaks pick seed up off the ground. people shutting off streetlights families settling in for the night.
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Sep 26, 2020
Sep 26, 2020 at 9:51 AM UTC
Song of The Night
packed in the family car, going slow down the smaller roads. radio set to a classics station. we talked about the latest news, things we've heard, how work was. sitting in silence for part of the ride, as we listened to the wind from the sunroof and windows. the apple picking harvest is back again. I can't wait for supple afternoons with a crisp breeze. drinking sweet cider and munching on powdered rounds. walking orchard rows of tower trees \plucking red noses high and low. sneaking bites in between picks, juice dripping down face and sticky fingers. it's like you're a child again, on slow weekend mornings. dragging day passes on, the parts tied in conversations and quiet moments. crack of twigs a crushed creed that fills the spaces of apples falling to the floor, bruised by a sharp hit. I pick them up to look at, taking in the dents and gray flesh. I throw them back to the compost beneath the fruit tree. the pieces that escape scars, I plop into my sack that's gradually getting heavier.
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Aug 26, 2018
Aug 26, 2018 at 11:47 AM UTC
Ode To Autumn Apples
traffic backup,     roadwork signs. drive down road,     little houses treed yards.     brown leaves, first sign of fall.     kids about to go back to school\parents     return to work. rolling on the seconds go,     ticking by faster each year so it     seems. cars piled up,      to slow, won't go. tiny dancers in the      wind blow on to car windows,      another sign of coming Harvest Season.      people resist the clear trademarks      enjoying the fall, but resenting the      winter. I can't understand      New England birds, you're housed in      cocoons like caterpillars that guard against the      elements, not freezer coldness      that animals call home. I'm not sure the memo      reached you, but this isn't the      South. trees like snakes,      shed their rainbow skins, as     "Old Man Winter" kicks in. the sound of       leaves crunching, cold on the floor under foot.      Autumn's death has no memorial,      birds flying South a eulogy.
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Aug 24, 2018
Aug 24, 2018 at 4:55 PM UTC
Ode To Turning Seasons
ice came down mixed with rain streaked windows on this april spring day thunderclap struck the sky bolted across blanket white deck slick greased up the skillet stir up some eggs fried, plated bangs, knicks, scrapes pushes on curb-top pours into driveway rips mailboxes from posts in muck like drums rat-a-tat rat-a-tat down it spills beating on housetops, hose-water streets neighbors drive on wash-out roads a few speed through riper to pass slow folks losing electricity trees fallen 'round hibernating, little, town colorless sounds clog up headset on a mismatch sort of day out-of-place ride-out gasket blown
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Jul 23, 2018
Jul 23, 2018 at 8:49 PM UTC
spring break freeze
Bruised bananas, oddball oranges arranged apples/pleasant, purple, plums. mouth suckers/sour, pucker footballs. Scrumptious, seeded, spheres, carved centers bullseye red. Tiny, tangy, tangerines toying tongue juicy joy lasting leisure twisted, **** grapefruit/paralyzing buds. Spring strawberries dripping stain white shirt brand new. Green grapes, giant reds, sweet bursts eye explosion. Little lime sliced, ice in drink, slowly sipped pretty pineapple rounds Christmas jellied. Pulverized pomagranate splitter splatter all around shrunken, squeezed, prunes/beet colored juice bottle. Bitter bite, cold cherries/yuck yuck, they're the pits.
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Jul 23, 2018
Jul 23, 2018 at 8:47 PM UTC
fruit salad
through little roads tired car pokes on the track to Ordinary Joe's gatecrasher, purple shuttered, fort between two white picket fence houses tucked up half-pint box out of line on the line in cold, squeezed, lemonade sweet spring ambrosia to the lip of deep green blanket children sit on, play on running around shoes and socks thrown on sidewalk hot as frying pan crack an egg/hear it sizzle dotted trees all the same side to side rooms hide in cramped spaces like cubbies slips of lip like butter roll off snake tongues daggers pointed circus act on display or an animal in the zoo that doesn't fit in this topsy-turvy slide-show called life hackneyed stares glued in place on childish faces like a match of heads or tails cupped hands carry quarters for crank candy jars at mall, or pick-up sticks snatched from floor
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Jul 22, 2018
Jul 22, 2018 at 12:11 PM UTC
through little roads
Coming down, it all falls down. let yourself fly away like free bird. slow up your pace losing full speed, lend your ears to things heard. all gathered 'round please take heed. Coming down, it all falls down. trading this nightmare for a dream. down on my knees eyes to sky, carvings I read what do they mean? I stare at the faces of passersby. Coming down, it all falls down. I'll move on to a place for only bards. pushed 'n shoved idiots don't budge, bang their gavels loud and hard. people acting like a judge. Coming down, it all falls down. one day grins will turn to frowns. hecklers claim seeds sowed, in this clean shaven town. no "X's" mark the spot or roads. Coming down, it all falls down. won't anybody put'em in place? misplaced doubt and fear, crooked smirk on face. people stop and sneer. Coming down, it all falls down. you see won't rearrange? that what you think it never changes, how can it be?
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Jul 22, 2018
Jul 22, 2018 at 12:08 PM UTC
Coming Down #2
thunder saw the eye of storm, it saw cutting wind, hail crashing down hard. mud on streets, snapped limbs swooped, zig-zag bolted sky. slick night dash of cars. things built of metal, left out turned to rust. banging shutters tapping house like a drum, or fingers scratching them like washboards in a jug band. listen to backdoor radio, jamboree of the night. nighttime animal sounds on speaker, thunder greeted broiling sky, lit-up like a firecracker show. refuse flew in cloudless sky, rain put out fire.crickets played fiddles in grass, as wind blew panpipes. people heard nature's chords as a eulogy to the snake-skin of parted days.
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Jul 22, 2018
Jul 22, 2018 at 12:06 PM UTC
Thunder Saw The Eye Of Storm
crows near barn faded red white stripe panes scitter scatter peck at grass crunch leaves coated floor scavenging seeds overhead like gold/red skyscrapers angular tall declension touches down free fall folks claim it's passed us by it jostles senses ramshackle deck weak 'n worn flimsy 'n haphazard wobbly uncertain balls on railing fall into hands dismantling of childhood once was no longer is whistles blow crunchers onto old meeting place furry Beanie Baby zips across pole
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Oct 21, 2017
Oct 21, 2017 at 4:14 PM UTC
10/21/2017
hit the fields runnin'    check back brother    sister let me teach ya'll    how to act don't wind up shunned    by the Pharisee crowd, wave ****** flag cool    colors loud don't hold    baited 'n hooked people    push 'n shove take another look    see **** ya'll do to me    us    anyone bicker clash dustups    like jabs    at punchin' bags, knock testament    down    inside gut play rough    balance tough    ***** dumps can't have    place on run    not planned or deliberate desecration's child dislodged    drabbletailed     'n wild daemon/cacodemon sittin' on shoulder presses down    like cinder blocks reels 'n rocks steps in avenue     make or break waves goin' steady    backed down 'till now up in face    utter stainin' shakedown    beat down daggers fly around big shot judge 'n jury    rapid fire sea fury shook up soda pop    foaming soft cap off slides down fast slow to swallow    won't last sweet things    arise 'n pass
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Oct 20, 2017
Oct 20, 2017 at 4:13 PM UTC
Rambler's Blues