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AComfyKnight
27/MTF/Medford, Oregon I tried writing a song and it became a poem. / I'd love to know what you think, even if it may be criticism, I always want to improve. I put up pretty much everything I write, so don't mind if some is kind of bad.
I wonder if you think about me, how many times your beautiful mind brushes the idea of mine. I think about The Times we spent laughing over things no one else would understand, talking to each other about things no one else got. I wonder where your mind goes when you're drifting off to sleep, do you think of what we could have been or what we could still be. I want you more than ever now, I can hardly sleep. But I know that I can never have you.
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Apr 20, 2019
Apr 20, 2019 at 3:22 PM UTC
We
Did you know that I love you I wanted to make sure you knew I really wanted to show you How much I care for you I let you back into my life I let you see my core I let you see the game I play I even let you score But the game you play isn't mine You aren't the kind of person To show yourself to me At least not the me I want you to see I'm not that man I pretended to be Without the painful chest But I wasn't able to keep it up I was never good at chess Why did I let you in again Why did I think you could be better Why, oh why did I ever believe That you were full of anything but pain Pain that I drowned myself in When I ripped you open And now my chest is full to bursting With emptiness and yearning But I can't ever have you A fact that we both know And now the curtains have come down On our worst and final show Forever to be a herald of you Of what you do to good men You break them down and eat them Never to be seen again But when the sun rises on the new day And when it shines upon me I'll show the world what I've become I'll be the one that got away
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Dec 2, 2018
Dec 2, 2018 at 5:55 AM UTC
Know
It feels like you're crushing my chest It feels like a knife in my back It feels like a long sprint after a long lonely winter It feels like I haven't breathed since we met I know you so well, and you know me too I know that you know how much I want you I know that you'll never truly understand How much I have hurt; How much I can stand Why won't the you in my head let me be I wanted to share my heart with you I wanted you to see See the depth of my love and affection All I wanted was that simple connection The collection of feelings that I've never felt To be loved by another despite yourself All I wanted was to see If I could truly make you happy I'm sorry I couldn't.
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Dec 2, 2018
Dec 2, 2018 at 5:32 AM UTC
Chest
There is a fog that lies on this land A fog so dense I cannot think All I want is for it to fade All I want is peace But it will never go for long An hour or day or maybe more But in the end it always returns Will it ever be no more? I tried to fight the fog with fire and flame I tried to fight with love I tried to fight with substances But the fog still lays its claim Maybe someday I'll find a way To banish the fog upon this land But until then I'll slave away Until I meet my end
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Nov 28, 2018
Nov 28, 2018 at 4:11 AM UTC
Fog
You talk about Him every day He makes the light shine in your eyes He makes you want to love He makes you want to cry I know He has some things I never could He understands in a way I can't Makes you believe in love All of that I wish I could do When you talk about Him your lips curve softly up Your face shines like I've never seen He has something I do not I wish I was all you needed When I think about that day That day you told a story About a clumsy girl And her brush with closeness When I heard about that day All I wanted was to scream I pictured it in my head It's now become a constant stream I wish i could just cut it out The thought of you and him I wish I never awoke On the day I first laid eyes on you But to me has this curse been bestowed To want you evermore I don't know what I'd be without you I wish I could close the door
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Nov 28, 2018
Nov 28, 2018 at 4:01 AM UTC
Him
I've been trying to erase you from my mind, But I'm scared now that I almost accomplish my goal.
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Nov 28, 2018
Nov 28, 2018 at 3:33 AM UTC
i don't know what to do.
What is the price I pay for health The price I pay for this is wealth In the late night hours I think and dream So that in pain I may not scream What should I do with my precious life Frought with pain; Fought in strife I want to be the best I can I want to be a better man But how can I make my dream so When all I know is what I'm told Can I bring myself to live Until I'm gray and old I want to live; Don't want to die I want to see ahead what lies But can I with this awful style I can't seem to even smile
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Nov 27, 2018
Nov 27, 2018 at 3:15 PM UTC
Price
you will make it, even if it's by the skin of your teeth -- which will pearl into a smile that reaches your endless eyes sleep if you're exhausted but you will rise; energy cannot end, so your soul will be fine arise, darling, we're going to be fine
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Nov 27, 2018
Nov 27, 2018 at 3:04 PM UTC
endless
I had been wandering blindly in darkness, then you found me You brought with you the sun and it has been shining through the clouds ever since How am I now to cope with being alone in the dark, once more? When in the light I was taught to see
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Nov 27, 2018
Nov 27, 2018 at 3:02 PM UTC
Don't leave me alone in the dark