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The snow melts,
Trickles onto the roads,
Freezes into ice,
Right at my shoes.

And the water rolling off the roofs,
Forms spiked icicles,
Falling from the ledges,
Stabs my arm.
"Inches of snow is better than a light layer of ice."
-The man who slipped on the sidewalk.
Jordin 1d
This is a story of Water
Of Puddles and Drops
Of Struggles and Flops

This is a story of Water
Of Rivers and Lakes
Of Mounds & Quakes

This is a story of Water
Of Water where None
Of Water where Sum

This is a story of Water
A Water where Thy
A Water where Why
The first thing to say about this poem is that there is a symmetry to the phases of my life.
The first stanza maps to A4 (18-20).
The second stanza maps to A5 (20-21).
The third stanza maps to A6 (21-22).
The fourth stanza maps to A7 (22-?).

While A1-A3 (0-18) were important in their own right, they were not that significant in terms of my inner/psychic/spiritual transformation.
It's in A4 that the inner journey really begins.

The next thing to say about this is there is a progression of water.
It begins with smaller bodies of water: "Puddles & Drops"
Transitioning to larger bodies of water: "Rivers & Lakes"
Finding its body of water limit with: "Water where None" & "Water where Sum" and finally transcending the limit with "Water where Thy" & "Water where Why"

(WARNING: DEEP DIVE AHEAD)

You see the symbol of water is quite a global symbol.
If we were to construct a kind of framework for fleshing out the symbol of water maybe a non-exhaustive representation would look something like this:


The Symbol of Water:
Water & Phases of Matter
Water & Life: Birthplace of Life
Water & Life: Bridge between Animate & Inanimate
Water & Life: Sustenance of Life
Water & Life: Body Composition
Water & Water Dynamics: Capacity to Flow
Water & Water Dynamics: Capacity to Crash
Water & Water Dynamics: Capacity to Erode mountains
Water & Water Dynamics: Capacity to Take shape of Container
Water & Water Depth: Bodies of Water
Water & Water Depth: Oceanic Layers
Water & Religion & Myth: The Bible: The Tohu Wa Bohu
Water & Religion & Myth: The Bible: The 4 Rivers of Eden
Water & Religion & Myth: The Bible: The Flood
Water & Religion & Myth: Babylonian: Tiamat
Water & Religion & Myth: Egyptian: Nu


Going into the concepts a little deeper:
The Generality of This:
In This is a Story of Water The Generality of this is both speaking to my own inner/psychic/spiritual journey as well as the general inner/psychic/spiritual journey that may apply to others & creation at large.

The Drops:
The use of Drops also has multiple meanings.
On the one hand, it speaks to the minimal unit or body of water.
On another, it speaks to creative drops of insight as it is A4 where the frequency of my creativity increased. Also given the falling connotations of drops, it is referencing the starting condition of inner water & the (biblical) fall.

The Struggles & Flops:
The use of Struggles & Flops also has multiple meanings.
On the one hand, it speaks to the common pattern of trying in life & not succeeding whilst speaking more personally to the burnout cycle which was prevalent in this part of my life as a consequence of trying to adhere to vows I had set for myself before the importance of flow was recognised & sufficiently cultivated.

The Rivers & Lakes:
The use of Rivers & Lakes also has multiple meanings.
More typically there is a juxtaposition of Rivers as running or flowing bodies of water & lakes as still bodies of water. Furthermore, both can be seen as intemediary bodies of waters.
Beyond Rivers and streams as a running and intermediary body of water, there is a further association within my internal symbolic landscape to Buddhism via streams & Theravada stages of enlightenment; of which it likens the stages of enlightenment in terms of relation to streams. The placement of Rivers in the second stanza is further significant given it is in A5 that I start to get rather deep in Buddhism & cultivate meditative flow.
Beyond Lakes as a still & intemediary body of water there is a further assosciation to this period of time before I was plunged in the wider psychic ocean as well as the psychic experiment that induced such a transition. I sometimes refer to this as Noyoga or Identitity Models and there is a visual assosciated with it.

The Mounds & Quakes:
The use of Mounds & Quakes here also has meanings.
For reasons that I won't get into here mountain symbolism is quite significant in terms of my overall journey through life. The use of mounds here in both its natural & artificial kind speaks to that. The latter part of A5 was highly disruptive due to a psychic experiment I underwent which led to a disintegration of my psyche & ultimately a Snap which marks the beginning of A6. So while Mounds more or less characterises most of this phase, Quakes characterise the back end giving way to something deeper.

The Water Where None:
The use of None here also has multiple meanings via the word void.
In one sense it speaks to my world being void of reality or out of touch with regular realistic reality and the corresponding psychic manifestations. Whilst on the other hand, in terms of being void of will & the egoic defences being overcome & subordinate to the contents of the psyche, where up untill that point i had been living a very top down willfull existence. As well as the natural connection of void & the void & the abyss.

The Water Where Sum:
The use of Sum here also has multiple meanings.
On the one hand, you could say it is a codename for the Ocean given the Ocean is the largest body of water. Before this stanza & the phase it corresponds to we have been dealing with drops, puddles, rivers, and lakes. Now we were plunged into the wider ocean. Perhaps one can make a Jungian comparison here and say that while before we were mostly dealing with the contents of the personal unconscious although not entirely, now we are confronted with the contents of the collective unconscious. There is a further use of Sum here and that is again a codename but this time to a specific transcendent experience I call the 11 days of Creation or 11 days of C which was my first full-blown manic experience & which was extremely fruitful from the perspective of the global idea & it's consolidation through modeling.

A Water Where Why:
The use of Why here also has multiple meanings:
On the one hand, it speaks to the highest principle.
Take the notion or encapsulation of who what when where why how.
A natural question to ask is which is the most fundamental of the bunch.
A reasonable candidate to that question might be why given its meta nature & its capacity to strip back the rest. Beyond this general why it also finds specificity in being a kind of justification for the pain & difficulty of the journey that has led up to this as well as perhaps if we can view it through the lens of enlightenment as the pinnacle of the path it represents the moment of sudden & final illumination or enlightenment which if related to my own journey perhaps speaks to the Rainbow Body experience which now is not the time to get into.

A Water Where Thy:
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Points of Structure:
The poem consists of 4 stanzas 3 lines apart.
That makes it a Quaternity—Trinity structure.
This is in contrast to Mother My Mother which is a Trinity—Quaternity structure consisting of 3 stanzas and 4 lines each.
If you count the lines redundantly there are only 12 lines.
If you count them in a non-redundant way there are only 9 lines.
Furthermore given the repetition of the line "This is a Story of Water" at the beginning of each Stanza this would classify this poem as having what I refer to as a Semi Sandwich structure.
The sequence of the number of lines is of course 3, 3, 3, 3.

Points of Synchronicity:
Much of the Poetic Canon begins in ER5.
If one could understand the psychic significance of Ego Relation 5 in relation to Ego Relation 4 they would realise the magnitude of this statement.
There are only 12 poems in the poetic canon that are written in Ego Relation 4.
This poem is the 11th poem and thus the 2nd last poem written in Ego Relation 4.
The numbers 11 & 12 are especially significant when considered in relation to a cycle.
11 can mean 12 & vice versa depending on the starting base number (0 or 1).
In addition to the poem's number count this poem happens 12 days before the Leviathan Dream Sequence & beginning of Ego Relation 5. It is not the time to go into detail here but once again 12 days before this event seems something worth mentioning given its relation to a full cycle. The contents of the Leviathan Dream Sequence very much consisted of water-based symbolism among many things; after all Leviathan is the Great Religious Mythical Beast of the Depths/Sea. If I am not mistaken this poem was in part response to reading Revelation 13 which is further broken down into sub-chapters The Beast Out of The Sea & The Beast of the Land. There is even more religious synchronicity given the day on which this poem arose was GOOD Friday. If one can make the connection between Christ & the Jungian SELF as well as expanding the Edward Edinger Diagrams of Ego Self Axis, one can very much see that Ego Relation 5 & The Edinger Diagram state that maps to it is very much a kind of crucifixion. One is pinned to the plane of the SELF or the cross of the SELF. Mobility is transformed as is will; for better or worse. Good Friday is of course the day Christ was crucified. Upon composing this poem I spontaneously retrospectively had the urge to listen to Kanye West / Ye's song Water. Thus there is a web of interrelated synchronicity here. Some prophetic, some in real-time, some retrospective.

Connection to The Wider Canon:
Theme: Water Poem
This poem is one of the first Water Theme Poems.
Specifically, it is the 4th.
The Water theme is one of the most prevalent themes that shows up in my canon.
Theme: Cracks of the Cracks
Theme: Ego Relations
Theme: Joseph Campbell Quote Mystic & Psychosis
It could be said this is also related to a later theme that shows up; a fixation & exploration of the Joseph Campbell Quote "The Psychotic drowns in the same water that the mystic swims".
Theme: The Big 3 C/See/Sea Trihomophone
Visual: The Story of Water

Song: The Ocean Beyond The Sea Societal S Grade
I had this rather exhilarating psychic experience when hearing the song The Ocean Beyond the Sea by Jon Foreman. It later became one of only 9 societal songs I classify as S grade.
We can easily see how this title is related to the poem by expanding out the song title like so: The Ocean Beyond The Sea Beyond The Lakes Beyond The Rivers Beyond The Puddles Beyond The Drops.
Song: Water Ye Societal
As mentioned above synchronistic connection to Ye's Water song.


Short Form
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You're on to me.
This river comes from death.
I am not good at hiding things—
I am full of water.

The most I can do
Is to stay in my body.
It's so much, sometimes,
You know I ask the same of you.

My mind, the great bridge,
flapping fishes in my hands.
They love me,
but I can't control them.

Put them, put them
back
in the black
water.

I don't want anything more
than to gentle myself.
I'll not rage the last wave—
I'll breathe this through.

Do what you do.
Do what you do.

You're in the rushes now.
The pull is too strong.
Slowly, nature takes us all
Back to the salty ocean.
This is a poem about my father.
Icy moon beams,
Follow dancing snow.
A clean white sheen,
Cast across the pier.

Waters ceased by icy means,
Frozen is their flow.
One moment crisp and clean,
On a winter pier.
Happy Thursday everyone!
i knew what i was destined to do,
to be,
to see
the surface of the water had broken
splattering liquid across the lakes surface
causing more and more ripples  
making my impact
only to slowly drift away losing momentum
slowly one day being forgotten...
making the water clear once again.
i wanted to make a poem called clear
let the water
trickle past your fingers,
like memory,
falling through the holes in your
head, cloudy, tattered.
let your head,
as fluffy as clouds,
brush up against stars,
constellations of
legends, of sodium
and potassium hallucinations.
sometimes people lie.
let the air
brush each
and every alveoli of your lungs,
each gyri and
sulci of your brain.
taste the salt --
sweat, the sea, your blood.
let the iron,
stable, sunbright
iron, carry itself
with the poise of
a red giant --
both radient,
striking, bleeding vermillion
and crimson.
stable, like a mountain,
letting rain run
itself over with the gentle
caress of an old lover,
who knows the contours and the
dips of the body,
and yet is getting --
reacquainted with it,
after a long time away.
the sweat of the
maker sticks to
the threads that
weave to make the library that makes
you, that
holds information, holds itself
in letters,
quartets, spirals.
taste the salt.
the wind sounds like the sea,
outside my bedroom window,
when it's too late
for my eyes to have
not made
their coupling of
the night.
imagine the salt-mist,
bright and cold on your
face, like the
splatter of blood,
leaking out of a nose;
like a river flowing
from precipitation, mist,
downstea, rejoining where it once
came from, where it was
always going to end up.
fate is a funny thing.
they say that every cell
of yours gets replaced
every seven years.
i wonder how long it takes salt,
iron --
to rise and to
fall,
like the eight minutes
the light of the
sun follows to get
here, to our
little pinprick eyes,
to our dopamine
and norepinephrine,
the spikes and
dips of neurons, firing.
how many heartbeats, breaths?
how many crashes of waves?
i wrote this after a truly terrible lecture that included a "poetry" writing bit exept it was SOOO constrained, like so formulaic. what if i want to express my emotions with fish. what then.
Tell me of your delight
The wisp of wind
That catches your hair
Breezy enough to sense
The winds direction
To which you set your sails
Moving through glass water
Unwilling to break

Tell me of your delight
In the shell of a snail
Digging up its squishy life
For just you alone
Thumbing through
In a smile and a jar of joy
Enough to break a mother's heart
With every win and loss
On your way to manhood

Tell me of your delight
As you swing in the air
Legs kicking as branches do
When the air picks you up
No longer weighing you down
All cares wash through
The space of regrets
And deposit themselves
As pebbles on the shore
Where your feet will land

Tell me of your delight
Where the garden snake
Attempts to outwit
Your stride in the grass
As you quietly watch
With patience of a lifetime
That marches ahead in this stillness
That is between the distance
Where now is forever
In your hand you swoop up
A life trying to escape yours
Gleeful are you as you set
The creature free once more

Tell me of your delight
As you see the rays of a day
Shine on every stone
And drop of rain
Washing rivers deleting cares
Surpassing a mother's gloom
Her soup of ingredients
Marinated longer than your
Innocence wants to keep birthing
It will be her death that it takes
To be released and unburdened
So you can breathe again this day
Heart open to drown all sorrows
Brand new as the dew
An electric connection,
Between my mind,
And my fingers.

I moved to wash my hands,
As the water froze fresh from the faucet,
My hands began to spark and fry.

Now I have frost burn,
In my electric skin,
From washing my hands in Michael's kitchen.

Now I'm wishing,
I never needed to make solid soup,
I could've stayed wet,
Contrary enough for my body's technology.
Inspired by the music of MF Doom, a recounting of when I made soup in Michael's kitchen. Wicked dream.
Fire, fire, countless fires
Fire of hate that nobody admires
Fire that hurts, maims and kills and innocent victims
Fire that burns, cremates and destroys many buildings
Fire that is misused
Fire that is diffused
Countries with more firepower rule
A gangster with a heavy fire is used as a fool
As a deadly instrument or tool to bully
To ****** and to eliminate potential enemies
Fires of hate, fires of hell that **** families
Fire, fires, uncontrollable fires on the sea
Fire, natural fires in California
Fire, deadly fires in Gaza
More fire, more power, more firepower
More power, more fire and more back-asswards power
Fire in the kitchen to cook gourmet food, delicious dinner
At the fancy cocktail hour
That’s my kind of fire, that’s good fire
Fire, fire, and ceasefire! Nobody wants war
Because war is hate, war is hell at the bar
War is nothing but an evil fire
War is not a game. War is not natural
War is a disaster. War is a man-made hell
War is a waste of human lives and resources
More water to **** all of fires and all sources
The world needs good fire to protect the environment
The world wants peace throughout the continent
God created One World, One People and One Race
And man invented division and many races in this space
Man created nepotism, money, hate, envy, discrimination
Terrorism, color, greed, betrayal, suffering and corruption
Fire, fires, ceasefire! We need rain, more water to quench the fire
We need Love to annihilate hate and more love to fire
The evil leaders that are destroying our World, our Universe
We want Peace and good fire for our World, for Our Universe.

Copyright © January 2025, Hébert Logerie, All rights reserved
Hébert Logerie is the author of several books of poetry.
A weak sailor was I,
When she caught my eye.
A beautiful lass,
Straight from the sea.
Fair skin,
Just like the petals of the water lily.
With blue eyes,
The color of ocean waves.

Thin figure,
Cast a shadow on the sunny summer bay.
Boy was she pretty,
The kind of girl an old fisher,
Would call his finest catch.
Sandy hair tied back,
Elegance like a species of ancient lore.

And I guess,
The water wasn't just what she was for.
For back on shore,
The boat club dance floor,
Wasn't quiet full without her.
The way she'd move,
Like a shiny fishing lure.
This is a remastered version of a summer poem I wrote a while ago. I know it's not summer yet, but I needed some summer sunshine.
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