Hello PoetryVoting

Vote

Voting-Boards

Home

HomeFollowingInboxNotifications

Read

ReadLiftedFeedsHeartedHistoryMy WritingNew poem

Explore

ExploreOrbitsWordsTagsClassics
Log in
0
Stars
0
Embers
0
Alerts
0
Inbox

Vote

Voting-Boards

Home

HomeFollowingInboxNotifications

Read

ReadLiftedFeedsHeartedHistoryMy WritingNew poem

Explore

ExploreOrbitsWordsTagsClassics
Log in
0
Stars
0
Embers
0
Alerts
0
Inbox

An Ode to Amateur Love

“That’ll be $58.16” The delivery man waited patiently, hands outstretched for our money, but tonight, the only other thing we had was our young love. Tonight was magic. Broken fingers, Fortune cookies, You in your sky blue Dr. Seuss shirt, and me shivering in the sub-zero space between the hotel lobby and your heart. But no, tonight we were sophisticated. Tonight was love. Nerdy couples, a fake dance floor, no room for any of us, let alone our love; me teaching you how to Wobble, you falling all over the place, but I still remember the way you smiled at me. Tonight was serenity. Long lines to get water, aching feet, glitzy strobe lights, cheesy music, John Legend, All of Me, of course. Room keys that got us nowhere, except maybe my heart, and phones that died all too quickly, just like the night did. Tonight we were rebellion. We danced all night, rushing blood in shaky palms, Not Coke, but Dr. Pepper in our cups, it was just you and me, in this dizzy world of hot pink and aqua blue disco lights, I knew that if I fell, you would catch me, and no matter how strong I felt, you still pulled me in and held me close, because tonight we didn't care what others thought. Tonight we were together. Hands and hearts entwined like leaves on a bush, young, awkward, naive brushes, the classic teen nerd couple. Just for the night at least. Because even if you could hold me in your hands, I’d never be the one in your heart.
Request permission to use this poem
a
Written by
ananya-kalahasti
For You?
a
Written by
ananya-kalahasti
Published
Feb 10, 2015
Lines·Words
79·264
Notes

the heartbreak of missing the happy part of this is greater than it ending

Tags
#love#boyfriend#romantic#teenage
Permission

Request to use this poem

Tell ananya-kalahasti how you would like to use it. We review requests before forwarding them.

AboutBlogFAQPrivacyTermsContact
© 2009-2026 Hello Poetry/v27.0 by @eliotyork
Explore
Hello PoetryVoting
Write